i did enjoy it for sure

It's not uncommon for atleast one kid in a marriage figure out something that at least one adult doesn't want them to know. And if I was a betting stallion, which I'm not, I'd say this is a certain ponicemare mentioned in the previous chapter.

Honestly, I'm excited to see what will happen.

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I'm glad, what do you think of the foals?

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Glad you like it! And yes, we will for sure.

11432903
interesting for sure

If Anonymous’ wife is cheating, I hope that he goes scorched earth on her and her lover.

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I can handle betrayal. What I can’t handle is others protecting the betrayers.

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Good to hear.

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Wait and see. Things will be interesting for sure.

11433028
mhm

I want to read it. The first chapter is well written and I can tell you put a lot of thought into this story, but the cheated on aspect brings to many bad memories to the surface. I'm sorry.

I’m invested

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And I shall deliver. Part 3 will be out in a week or less.

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I figured since it was a rarely talked about topic, I should be the one to delve into it. It's partially inspired my my own life events, but minus the kids part. My goal is to evoke emotion and hopefully, show an example of how soneone should handle it or show how people can struggle at a life altering event.

Stories in Manehatten aren't explored enough and I hope to delve into batpony culture to expand. I like the OCs I made, and I'm having fun exploring OC based stories.

But I hope to bring out the drama. This is new territory for me.

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That's a good idea, and is indeed a concept and environment that I have not seen to much of on here (you'll maybe see a chapter or two if that taking place in Manehattan and it's never enough to truly describe life there). Considering you're writing from experience, not only will you do good with the story, but you are a stronger person than me. Write your story, and get your message out there. I believe in you and support you even if I can't read the story.

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I do promise it will end in justice.

I can guess some things, but lets see where it truly goes.

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You know where it's going but the question is, how and what happens in the end ultimately.

Man I'm eating good with these new fanfics popping out of nowhere

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More will keep popping out. Stay tuned!

11442249
Hell yeah I will, very obvious it's going that way but can't wait to see how it's executed! Nuclear revenge or something else entirely different! Who knows!!