For shame 😒. Stealing a dead author's thing for yourself. And I don't mean a dead account. I literally mean Moth passed away, and the mods deactivated his account.

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It literally says that this fiction was based on/inspired by Moth's own. It would be stealing if he copied the story word for word. Also, he had another version beforehand before he wrote the remake.

Who made the cover art?

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This in the fricking description

This story is based/inspired by the chapter called "The Landlord does Sunset Shimmer" from the story Everybody does Sunset Shimmer by MythrilMoth

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I read it. Still stand by my comment, and I frankly don't care if people don't like it.

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One of those people, eh? Say no more, no need to engage any further.

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No, his explanation just wasn't good enough and this is still a terrible thing to do. Aside from being terrible in general

Stealing from the dead? Fucking hell.

well this fic has a turn of events, I would like to see who Sci-Twi was talking to

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You guys are aware that this is a FANFIC site right. A site literally dedicated to writing stories based off the original source material.

Not only that but why am I the only bad guy here? There are over thousands of stories on this site that are based on other people stories. Thus, expanding on the original. You know just like the main majority of the stories on this site and beyond does for the true canon (the tv show)

And I am very aware that Mythril Moth had passed away. I known that since I started the original version, years ago.

"First of the month" and "Sunset's Special Detention" are the stories I wrote to expand on the original. I do this for fun not glory. The same goes for all my stories.

Yes over 99% of them are based/inspired on others work, and I only have one original story to my name. But that's just something I enjoy doing. When a story catches my interest so strongly that I wish to expand it upon, and I share my ideas here.

All I do and ever did is write for fun. I always make sure to credit those who I based my stories off of. And yes, I always asked permission first.

I'll make sure to update my description on crediting Moth. It needs it.

Anyway, that's all I have to say.

Later

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Because when it's about someone who's died it becomes automatic more personal. I feel like that goes without saying?

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What about respect? I already showed from the start where the inspiration of this story originates from. I even put in the link. So, readers can see it for themselves.

If I didn't do any of that then I can see your point. But I didn't. The link is there, I never claimed this story to be 100% mine idea, and nothing is stopping you from supporting the original.

its a shame when children don't understand how inspiration works with creation
or the truth of written word nihil sub sōle novum.
And of course the dregs who come out of the woodwork, ignore you did what you are obligated to do and verbally attack you anyway because they're sad little existence isn't as exciting as they want it to be.

Yay! Finally the remake is here! Also by any chance I can get the source for the pic ? XD

this drama is great to read possibly better than the fic itself but can i get a source on the image

nice

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Derpibooru: 2034026

I can understand being ambitions with your writing, but what is essentially an over 12,000 word prologue is a little much.

I was waiting for the remake of this story and it doesn't disappointing at all

Also a nice touch for the message about MythrilMoth who inspired you, and forget about for those who disagree, that's a way to bring the new readers for where's come from the original one, in order to understand the remake and adaptation, your make the flame still alive

Also I laughed out for the Nutsack subplot, it's surprising how Sunset dodge that bullet over there

The sex scene changed a bit since it started with a bondage moment, also Futa is in the mix?! You Madman! Now you got my attention!

Keep it up

it's……meh,I guess……I once thought MLP would be at least a touch different from animes,turns out i was very wrong indeed……

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I knew it; it'd to be Smudge Proof: I could recognize the art style all the same...

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I really wanted to get all of the exposition out in one chapter. As I really wanted to expand from the original version I wrote.

And it's funny. You all say a 12,000-word prologue is too much, but I know a story with over 16,000 words.

See for yourself

I like the conversation between twilight and Sunset about the Nutsack incident, that bit made me giggle. Also Twilight and Sal finally interacting with each other is a nice touch.

The sex scene is pretty much the same as the previous one but a bit more detailed and with a few new additional sequences and I also noticed you added a different dialogue between Sunset and Sal before proceeding to the sex scene which gives off a totally different vibe compared to the old one. In short, It is somewhat the same but it feels different.

In my honest opinion...I like this a bit more than the old version. Great start so far! can't wait for more.

Who says that Sunset doesn't exist in the human world? Anyway I expected Sunset to be rich and wealthy.

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Can it be called stealing wen there is basically nothing copied from moths version? This looks like it was inspired by the og story

Edit: re read this story wand the other one and I still don’t know we’re you pulled out this was stolen beacuse this and landlord does sunset have almost nothing in common with each other

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But there is almost nothing in common with the two stories?

Wait wtf?..... last i checked this was edited to 9k words, but now it's back up to 15k again? The hell is going on here?

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Stupid new ideas I tried to make that didn't work out. So I returned it back to the way it was and will continue things normally. The next chapter will be out soon.

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Oh cool can't wait.. although that picture of Sal looks new. You know for the longest time it was hard for me to paint a mental image on what Sal looks like. I'm glad that i can finally stop imagining random faces for Sal lol