Twilight Sparkle wakes to a wasteland. Equestria as she knows it has been destroyed. Twilight must find out how this happened, and she must fight through a toxic gas that changes ponies into something unrecognizable to do it. Are her friends alive?
A masked assassin. A thieving archeologist. An ancient evil stirring beneath Ponyville. And the only things standing in their way are Daring Do and Phillip Finder.
War has come to Ponyville. As a criminal mastermind, a cruel pirate, and a mare with mysterious motives fight for control, Daring Do and Phillip Finder are put to the test with new cases and new foes.
[RGRE] An inexperienced unicorn and her human bodyguard travel to the dangerous heart of Preunification Equestria. This "alicorn" filly better be worth it.
This chapter was a bit mediocre. But hey, I'm sure it'll improve. So I'll trust the process and and keep this in my read it later until the other chapters come out.
11417297 I think it may just be context dependent. As the later chapters give us a better idea of what's going on, this first chapter may appear retrospectively much more sinister.
11417297 Horror a little new to me and I wanted to try something different to what I've been doing, and part of the reason its so rushed is because I tried to get it done for Halloween/Nightmare Night but that didn’t happen
second and final chapter will be coming in a few days.
Edit: so that was a lie.
One of these days I’m gonna call wanna my friends Strip Dick
First person I presume... seems alright for a dark fiction so far...
This chapter was a bit mediocre. But hey, I'm sure it'll improve. So I'll trust the process and and keep this in my read it later until the other chapters come out.
11417297
I think it may just be context dependent. As the later chapters give us a better idea of what's going on, this first chapter may appear retrospectively much more sinister.
11417297
Horror a little new to me and I wanted to try something different to what I've been doing, and part of the reason its so rushed is because I tried to get it done for Halloween/Nightmare Night but that didn’t happen
Second chapter when?
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its coming in fact its almost done it just took so long because I suffering from writers block and being busy with the holidays.
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From what I heard, writers block sounds like a dickhead.
it’s done
Wasn’t expecting that I’ll say.
Dam, I did not expect that ending.
lul.
Maybe you should have written "He turned away from me and began to walk towards the window, which was getting pounded by rain. Thunder rang out."
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opps that is poor wording lmao