A lot of this type of story — especially recently — haven't had the best prose, and while that may be kind of a petty thing to not read a story over, that's the way it is for me, even if I otherwise found the idea interesting.
pretty damn good introduction and i hope you keeps it up, after reading prey and lamb i hope their is more non human and pony mc stories that blow me outta the water with their quality and this look like one
You did a great job at making a believable response to being somewhere new and to being in a different body. Some might take to a new body like a fish to water, but most wouldn't. So thank you for that! Really refreshing to see.
I think I just found something amazing.
The prose here is excellent.
A lot of this type of story — especially recently — haven't had the best prose, and while that may be kind of a petty thing to not read a story over, that's the way it is for me, even if I otherwise found the idea interesting.
pretty damn good introduction and i hope you keeps it up, after reading prey and lamb i hope their is more non human and pony mc stories that blow me outta the water with their quality and this look like one
So it begins.
I like the inclusion of art, it gives a good reference.
Oh no, she's adorable!
I like this. Keep up the good work.
Awesome! Binge reading, HO!
An excellent and promising start.
You did a great job at making a believable response to being somewhere new and to being in a different body. Some might take to a new body like a fish to water, but most wouldn't. So thank you for that! Really refreshing to see.
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My words exactly lol