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Is Aspen a boy or a girl? You refer to them as "king" which is a male monarch and use the female pronouns at the beginning of this chapter.
On top of that, you seem to have this weird mix of 3rd and 1st person that makes reading this almost impossible to read.
tbh I'm dropping this story, It's too hard to figure out what's going on, and all the characters seem to share a few characteristics that I hate reading.
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Aspen is male, i just started writing so it doesn't really surprise me, i think maybe i'll take a while to move on with my other story to get more experience