I regret watching this while I'm watching JOJO, I'm re-reading the fight in ponyville like the fight from JOJO

There are a few he and him refering to zecora.
So rainbow attacked a mystery creature and now ponys are supprised they reacted. hopefully one of them will relise just how easy it would have been for the wolves to be orderd to kill insted and reconsider their views but likely not

You need an editor.

I feel like i'm having a stroke reading this story

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You need an editor.

The problem with that is, even though there is an army of people saying he should get an editor, those who actually offer to clean up the language issues, is always zero.

How about several of you claim a chapter, clean up the translation, then submit it to the Author as a private IM?

I used to do that all the time.

Monk
"The idea simply stated that when personal feelings are mixed with power, bad things happen." -Corvo

Well, I've caught up with the story, and I have to say that I like it. It's nice to see that there are consequences to actions. I just hope that you also include someone among the ponies who points out they they are actually responsible for that entire dumpster fire of a situation.

Monk
"Dumpster fire." Phrase referring to a fire in a business type garbage can. Refers to a destructive situation that could have easily been prevented or should not have happened in the first place.

I need like 10 episode more per day ok? (joking), i note the overlord reference in the 2 episode and i like so much, i hope she no get in bad term with zecora for all this. (sorry mi inglis is bad)

‘Evil troll grin’ i need more😈

very nice hope for more! whether appelblom can solve the problem

This character is an idiot. I know the betrayed picture was here that ponies be racist which is true. It's not a racist thing to assume that a group of formal monsters who attacked you are dangerous, in the worst part about this that he should have realized this. But this doesn't change that this guy is an idiot in who hasn't got control over his emotions. But I really be surprised he's taking his life advice from anime this is the kind of guy you should never get power without spending at least a couple of years explaining to him real life versus fiction. And in what world even in anime when you have a whole race of people only living around that race racism when they exist. But at least he's entertaining.