how Celestia and Luna came to be princesses. How they came to know each other. Unfortunately Celestia discovers her new little sister has an incurable, never heard of disease.
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I would recommend dropping the thees and thous and thys. Unless you’re writing the characters’ speech in old-timey Elizabethan English wholesale, it’s not worth it. You wind up with a mish-mash of modern diction with archaic pronouns interspaced within, and the end result is, uh, jarring. To say the least.
You’re also, um, not using them right. Often, you “thee” when you should “thou.”
I know sorry. Still trying to figure out which one goes where. It’s supposed to take place in the past at least. Ye seems foolproof though😂🤣
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