Story sounded pretty good til the hyper and futa tags showed.

hell yeah great job

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hope you enjoy :)

I'm casting my vote for Scootaloo...

awesome sweetie belle next

Lovely to see this posted, and Kiernan did a lovy job editing for you.

Edit: Casting my vote as Applejack, who better to to looking for AB than AJ.

Too bad it will have futa in it... but hey, you do you.

What you should consider, however, is adding the Anthro tag!

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im considering having 2 versions of the futa chapters (one without futa obviously) so I hope you'll enjoy, chapter 1 has no futa

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Oh, I have! It's been plenty enjoyable so far!

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:3 look forward to more

This entire comment may not be helpful, but I believe that the next should be either Applejack or Rainbow Dash. My reasoning is that they're already out in the woods, where the timberwolves can find them.

Alternative solutions are to have Scootaloo break away while Sweetie distracts Rarity, and while off on her own, be claimed.

Then there's the possibility that Rarity could grow fearful with how long they've been out, and try to leave, only to be stopped by Pinkie, who insists that Rarity stay, and goes out herself to look for everypony.

Of course, this is presuming that all captures take place on the same night. A week after the party would be a prime time to claim somepony else, when the attention has lowered.

Ah, but none of this is necessarily accurate. These are merely the musings I entertained my mind with while making ravioli. Take the ideas, or don't. It's up to you.

someone else or a combination of the options above?

Sweetie/Dash at the same time

... because that's my thing

You seem to have forgotten the "anthro" tag.

I say sweetie and Dash both, cause tricking Rarity is super easy… <.< >.> also I vote for Pinkie to secretly already be under the Timberwolves’ control and sneakily aiding in her friends and the CMC’s downfall :3

i saw a few votes for sweetiebelle and 2 of them were sweetiebelle + rainbowdash so ill be doing them both next chapter

I say Bon Bon. Show why Equestria's monster hunting agency hasn't been able to deal with them

Just sweetie belle.

I like this

I enjoyed this~! Could use an anthro tag though!

someone else or a combination of the options above?

I say a combination of all of the options above because I'd love to see this develop into a full blown orgy! Additionally, I'm hoping that futa tag means we'll be getting some incest and mare-on-mare action!

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also I vote for Pinkie to secretly already be under the Timberwolves’ control and sneakily aiding in her friends and the CMC’s downfall :3

Agreed, because an orgy among family and friends is the best kind of party!

Celestia and Cadance

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I guess it's too late to suggest both Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo then?

Also yes, this needs an anthro tag.

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already have that big orgy planned, but gotta save the best for last :P

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its never too late

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added it

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royal fun owo

11332175 Looking forward to it!

11331831 Or better yet, Celestia and Luna.
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ScootaBelle is always a plus.

ok vote closed but keep sudgesting more lovely ladies (and men maybe femboi shining armor is one of favorites) for the timberwolves to claim and breed.

or maybe some other beast?

As a creature made of wood, specifically oak, he blended in with the trees in this part of the forest perfectly. Even his more organic parts would be hard to notice, save for his deep lime-green glowing eyes, drooling maw and, frankly, huge cock. The veiny member ran alongside nearly the entirety of the beast's underside. The knot was about the size of Apple Bloom’s head, even when considering both sides of it. His balls were like fucking beachballs, bigger than a pony's head and hanging low between his thighs. In spite of his proportions, he was the most common type of timberwolf, and a fairly average-sized one, at that.

why, oh why, do timberwolves have flesh dicks? shouldn't it be wood??

Imma go against the obvious choices and throw a vote at Derpy. Heck, might as well throw Dinky in there too.

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i based them primarily off of the very few timberwolves that Sugarlesspaints has drawn, might have one in a coming chapter with a wooden dick

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oooh. sugarlesspaints. yeah i know that guy. ive only read "Earn Your Stripes" tho

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ye love there zebra dom stuff

Femboy Spike and femboy shining try to be heroes and get caught instead but before the deed is done femboy Macintosh rushes inBut it’s also caught

Sweetie belle and Scootaloo

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fembois are the best

That was quite a fantastic first chapter. I'm really looking forward to more

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soon

Now being dragged by her ponytail in one wolf’s teeth, she was brought into the cave, passing dozens of timberwolves and a dog bed that said “Fluttershy.”

You know... this makes me wonder if this is kind of a stealth sequel to Fluttershy's Timberwolf Fun. That had a few fun ideas there too, like in addition to the mental alteration, there's a physical aspect. Like the afflicted mare growing a green lines on her that look like vines, and a few leaves; becoming more timerwolf-like herself in essence. And her body becoming receptive to the timberwolves' desires, obeying by reflex to their wants, not that the victim minds being puppeted by her bestial masters!

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wish I could say I'm clever enough to make a stealth prequel but i didn't know that story existed lol, I just thought it'd be funny.

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I don't recall doing so, but I've apparently read the first chapter of that one. The idea sounds promising, and I'll have to give it another look when I have the time. Starting from the beginning, of course...

Timberwolf and clop is rare. At least, he didn’t kill her

Timberwolf Pony hybrids? Neat...