11620274 I have a surprising amount of people following me/supporting me who don’t watch the show but still read my fics, so I usually do stuff like that to fill them in
11620279 Well, I haven't thought about it but I completely get it. Also, I know the description clearly says about 'lot of teasing' but I must say that after n times it becomes kinda frustrating when you can't really start fapping cuz you don't know if it's for real this time or if it's gonna stop again. That's the biggest issue I have here, but besides that it's been a really enjoyable story so far, i'm definitely waitin' for more!
This story is on an entirely different level. The range of emotions it provokes is by turns enraging, encouraging, stimulating, lustful, and satisfying. I find myself being torn from rooting for the girls to succeed over the Tyrant, to reveling in their downfall, so I have to remind myself it's just one story and not canon. So, I'm conflicted. I came here fully aware I was reading a Porn story, and one of Domination and Non-Con, so I knew what to expect going in, but you've written both sides of this conflict so well that I'm able to sympathize and feel some regret for the girls' defeat...yet I can't stop reading.
Normally, Non-Con is certainly not my cup of tea, and I worry for myself this story has changed my view of this genre, but you've done it in such a way that is similar to my own style, in that the females resist male domination at first, but secretly long for it. I'm still repulsed by violent rape stories where it is obvious a crime is being committed, and I was quite relieved to find this wasn't one of those.
From the reading, I see you're saving Rainbow for last...and I applaud your decision! Pinkie remains my favorite pony to lewd, but I always luuuv me some Rainbow action, so I'm eagerly looking forward to that, although I expect you will write it in such a way that it will also be painful to read, as she'll have seen all her other friends defeated and permanently changed. Will she still be defiant? Will she still vow revenge? Or will she simply accept her fate, seeing all her friends have been turned into mindless sluts?
Nah. That doesn't sound like Rainbow Dash to me.
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...but she still needs a BIG dicking! and to become a good slut! As I said, I LUUUUV me some Rainbow Action!
11620428 When I write non-con, I always focus on the pleasure and make sure it is pleasurable for the character. Be it mind break or mind control, I always have the character enjoy it and/or be changed to love it in some way. Noncon focusing on genuine suffering or similar isn’t my cup of tea, is too realistic, and is just downright saddening at times. Good part of the whole “fucked so good they break into a slut” bit is that it isn’t really realistic, which leans it to a more fantasy idea and keeps it away from the reality of noncon.
But yeah, it’s hot as fuck when done in the “fucked into blissful submission” way. Not enough stories on the website do it that way. There’s a reason I try to balance every bad thing that happens to the mane 6 in this with some kind of lustful reaction or feeling of desire!
Also yeah dash is hot as fuck and my bias towards her is shining through big time in this story, heh.
Good part of the whole “fucked so good they break into a slut” bit is that it isn’t really realistic, which leans it to a more fantasy idea and keeps it away from the reality of noncon.
You're speaking my language, mate! Being "fucked into submission" is PURE fantasy, although I did have a girlfriend once that liked to act all independent everywhere but in the bedroom...there, she absolutely loved being dominated, so it isn't that much of a stretch from reality.
Also, I forgot to mention kudos on your handling of AJ's submission...that was UBER hot and in keeping with the majority of pornmeister's views on her, in that she's an anal whore! I personally LUUUV writing her as such...it's just sumthin' about that big, round, apple-booty that just makes the words fly off the page!
This epic of yours has inspired me to write more submission and mind-break stories of my own, though I doubt I'll be able to turn out ones of this caliber just yet...
Even if I were to die, as long as I didn’t exceed the volume my magic was capable of, the target would still be a slave.
I get the feeling this is how he'll be beaten. If he subjugates the Mane 6, no biggie. But if he also tries to bring every other alicorn under his thrall - on top of whoever comes between them - he'll likely overwhelm his magic and they'll all break free. Probably don't wanna be in the same room as a packed harem full of very pissed off mares. Although I'm just guessing based on a single line of dialogue.
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I have a surprising amount of people following me/supporting me who don’t watch the show but still read my fics, so I usually do stuff like that to fill them in
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JFK, I am thrilled to read this. Thanks for writing it!
This is some excellent content! Keep up the great work! 👍
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Well, I haven't thought about it but I completely get it. Also, I know the description clearly says about 'lot of teasing' but I must say that after n times it becomes kinda frustrating when you can't really start fapping cuz you don't know if it's for real this time or if it's gonna stop again. That's the biggest issue I have here, but besides that it's been a really enjoyable story so far, i'm definitely waitin' for more!
Every King needs heirs to his throne Twilight maybe the only one able to produce Worthy heir
Incredible.
This story is on an entirely different level. The range of emotions it provokes is by turns enraging, encouraging, stimulating, lustful, and satisfying. I find myself being torn from rooting for the girls to succeed over the Tyrant, to reveling in their downfall, so I have to remind myself it's just one story and not canon. So, I'm conflicted. I came here fully aware I was reading a Porn story, and one of Domination and Non-Con, so I knew what to expect going in, but you've written both sides of this conflict so well that I'm able to sympathize and feel some regret for the girls' defeat...yet I can't stop reading.
Normally, Non-Con is certainly not my cup of tea, and I worry for myself this story has changed my view of this genre, but you've done it in such a way that is similar to my own style, in that the females resist male domination at first, but secretly long for it. I'm still repulsed by violent rape stories where it is obvious a crime is being committed, and I was quite relieved to find this wasn't one of those.
From the reading, I see you're saving Rainbow for last...and I applaud your decision! Pinkie remains my favorite pony to lewd, but I always luuuv me some Rainbow action, so I'm eagerly looking forward to that, although I expect you will write it in such a way that it will also be painful to read, as she'll have seen all her other friends defeated and permanently changed. Will she still be defiant? Will she still vow revenge? Or will she simply accept her fate, seeing all her friends have been turned into mindless sluts?
Nah. That doesn't sound like Rainbow Dash to me.
....
....
....
...but she still needs a BIG dicking! and to become a good slut! As I said, I LUUUUV me some Rainbow Action!
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When I write Rainbow getting teased so intensely it rubs off on my readers…
Sombra for real got too much power
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When I write non-con, I always focus on the pleasure and make sure it is pleasurable for the character. Be it mind break or mind control, I always have the character enjoy it and/or be changed to love it in some way. Noncon focusing on genuine suffering or similar isn’t my cup of tea, is too realistic, and is just downright saddening at times. Good part of the whole “fucked so good they break into a slut” bit is that it isn’t really realistic, which leans it to a more fantasy idea and keeps it away from the reality of noncon.
But yeah, it’s hot as fuck when done in the “fucked into blissful submission” way. Not enough stories on the website do it that way. There’s a reason I try to balance every bad thing that happens to the mane 6 in this with some kind of lustful reaction or feeling of desire!
Also yeah dash is hot as fuck and my bias towards her is shining through big time in this story, heh.
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Inb4 I massively disappoint
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You're speaking my language, mate! Being "fucked into submission" is PURE fantasy, although I did have a girlfriend once that liked to act all independent everywhere but in the bedroom...there, she absolutely loved being dominated, so it isn't that much of a stretch from reality.
Also, I forgot to mention kudos on your handling of AJ's submission...that was UBER hot and in keeping with the majority of pornmeister's views on her, in that she's an anal whore! I personally LUUUV writing her as such...it's just sumthin' about that big, round, apple-booty that just makes the words fly off the page!
This epic of yours has inspired me to write more submission and mind-break stories of my own, though I doubt I'll be able to turn out ones of this caliber just yet...
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I get the feeling this is how he'll be beaten. If he subjugates the Mane 6, no biggie. But if he also tries to bring every other alicorn under his thrall - on top of whoever comes between them - he'll likely overwhelm his magic and they'll all break free. Probably don't wanna be in the same room as a packed harem full of very pissed off mares. Although I'm just guessing based on a single line of dialogue.
another one down for the count i would say
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i appreciate that AJ being an anal babe is pretty much canon, at least among fans