The cover art for this story is incredibly well done, and you can find the full version (which has the rest of the mane six in it) at derpibooru id: 3150856
Or, preferably, you can go directly to Light’s Twitter and support him there! He did amazing work for this fic’s cover, and he definitely deserves the love!
Also, here’s a fun fact, this story is the only reason any of my stories exist. The original version of this fic, which is long gone, was my first attempt at fanfiction. My friends eventually told me to try and start publishing stories soon after, and the rest is history.
11619565 Funnily enough, there was originally a prologue. I scrapped it because I want to use her and some others in the eventual sequel. You'll get that luring concept still though, just...used to lure a different Princess in...
11619745 I will be looking forward to that. I love evil, dominating, stud Sombra fics, but I always end up prefering seeing Cadence as the one being dominated.
Was expecting this to come out…And I'm confused to see that there's no "dark" tag. The writing stuff is fine as always, I know the usual non-consensual or mind control content aren't "dark" because the control person technically isn't "the villain", and if we see Sombra as the main character here then it's technically not "tragedy", but when he wins as the villain and corrupts the heros like this… Yeah, please don't mind, just a question I have here, hope you had fun writing These stories. Also I'm curious about how you can make it engaging throughout all 100k of porn with only them as the protagonists and make it sexy but not too cruel to watch at the same time... You have my attention.
11619972 Well with all those stories here I honestly thought you'd already know about it, and considering the stuff you're writing and the nature of your OC I'm quite surprised to hear you say that. I mean this certainly would warrant the dark tag, "Villains winning and breaking the heros into submission in such vicious ways" is hardly ever not dark, if I dare say it even needs to be reminded that with the heros' hopes lost, it needs to have the tragedy tag as well.
But you do whatever you see fit, I'm just a little reader with only average tolerance to dark, spooky stuff. Curious to see how will you make it engaging across the very long tale but not too cruel for people to handle.
11619981 From what most people have told me, it isn’t that rough to them surprisingly. I always focus on the pleasure of it all, hence the mind break, and that helps make things a bit less dark. I’ll consider the tag, might add it, might not. Just going off what I’ve been told by others, I’m not too sure!
11619992 Well...that's OK, as long as this story is served well then all is good, but a part in me must point out that the description alone makes it extra dark to just think about for me, and if people are willing to start the story knowing there will be serious mind break and bad ending then they're likely to be able to handle the rest.
Those who can't…well I don't think they will engage with you about this story to begin with as long as they are nice enough to leave the story alone.(Even I am not that good at handling all that darkness as long as I need to use my brain to imagine the stuff) Besides, I don't think this is that different from your usual mindbreak, so your usual readers should be fine. (I actually don't read your story that much aside from your last one so I had to ask)
I would argue that it's potentially (potentially) possible that the Elements of Harmony can wash away Sombra's Permanent Enslavement Spell, the only issue is that nobody realized yet that you can use the Elements without needing the Elements.
I also think there's still hope that thanks to The Young Six or the Pillars having the same type of bond that the Mane Six have. Plus, they have some male members in both teams so it's not like Sombra's spell will work with them, eh?
As long as they either get the Elements or realize that the Magic of Friendship can be used without the Elements then Equestria is saved. Even if Sombra permanently corrupts both the Mane Six and the Alicorns.
my balls can't handle this
OH BOY ITS HERE!
This is too hot for me to make a detailed comment about what I liked best
Literally everything is amazing
I need this story
Author please say that in this story also be Celestia and Cadance please?
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This story is already over 100,000 words with only the Mane Six being the focus.
Once the remaining chapters are released, the sequel will contain those two, Luna, and Gleaming Shield
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You can't just make me excited for the sequel!
This one has just started! XD
The cover art for this story is incredibly well done, and you can find the full version (which has the rest of the mane six in it) at derpibooru id: 3150856
Or, preferably, you can go directly to Light’s Twitter and support him there! He did amazing work for this fic’s cover, and he definitely deserves the love!
Also, here’s a fun fact, this story is the only reason any of my stories exist. The original version of this fic, which is long gone, was my first attempt at fanfiction. My friends eventually told me to try and start publishing stories soon after, and the rest is history.
Yay for clopfic lore
very nice, kinda reminds me of a comic of them and Sombra
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GLEAMING!
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Don’t need guards when you’ve got that porn story main character plot armor! (But seriously I don’t think he has any guards yet!)
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of course. I was just wondering while he's "busy", what keeps the crystal ponies in check and such.
Plus, old habit of a thought
Oh, damn, dude, hilarious timing on this one. I was literally just sat about workshopping my own take on this premise
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Oh man, I’d love to see ya do it! Been a fan of your work for a long while now!
I love Sombra fics especially with bad ends, there have been a very few
I love it so far, can't wait to see more
Ooh yay another Sombra story to add to my collection, and a clopfic at that! I’m so excited to read this one.
You have my attention.
I wish there was a prologue of an already conquered Cadence sending an innocent letter to lure the Mane 6 into being trapped by Sombra
Looks at Title
Looks at Description
... Call up Badger, we got another Sombra to beat the absolute shit out of.
Holyy
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Funnily enough, there was originally a prologue. I scrapped it because I want to use her and some others in the eventual sequel. You'll get that luring concept still though, just...used to lure a different Princess in...
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Thank you!
Maybe someday. Hopefully.
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I will be looking forward to that. I love evil, dominating, stud Sombra fics, but I always end up prefering seeing Cadence as the one being dominated.
Was expecting this to come out…And I'm confused to see that there's no "dark" tag.
The writing stuff is fine as always, I know the usual non-consensual or mind control content aren't "dark" because the control person technically isn't "the villain", and if we see Sombra as the main character here then it's technically not "tragedy", but when he wins as the villain and corrupts the heros like this…
Yeah, please don't mind, just a question I have here, hope you had fun writing These stories.
Also I'm curious about how you can make it engaging throughout all 100k of porn with only them as the protagonists and make it sexy but not too cruel to watch at the same time...
You have my attention.
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I honestly forgot that was a tag. Not sure if it’s applicable here or not. My experience with it, the tag I mean, isn’t extensive
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Well with all those stories here I honestly thought you'd already know about it, and considering the stuff you're writing and the nature of your OC I'm quite surprised to hear you say that. I mean this certainly would warrant the dark tag, "Villains winning and breaking the heros into submission in such vicious ways" is hardly ever not dark, if I dare say it even needs to be reminded that with the heros' hopes lost, it needs to have the tragedy tag as well.
But you do whatever you see fit, I'm just a little reader with only average tolerance to dark, spooky stuff. Curious to see how will you make it engaging across the very long tale but not too cruel for people to handle.
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From what most people have told me, it isn’t that rough to them surprisingly. I always focus on the pleasure of it all, hence the mind break, and that helps make things a bit less dark. I’ll consider the tag, might add it, might not. Just going off what I’ve been told by others, I’m not too sure!
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Well...that's OK, as long as this story is served well then all is good, but a part in me must point out that the description alone makes it extra dark to just think about for me, and if people are willing to start the story knowing there will be serious mind break and bad ending then they're likely to be able to handle the rest.
Those who can't…well I don't think they will engage with you about this story to begin with as long as they are nice enough to leave the story alone.(Even I am not that good at handling all that darkness as long as I need to use my brain to imagine the stuff)
Besides, I don't think this is that different from your usual mindbreak, so your usual readers should be fine. (I actually don't read your story that much aside from your last one so I had to ask)
Author for your sequel of this story with Celestia and Cadance can we hope to see also such amazing sexy picture cover?
I would argue that it's potentially (potentially) possible that the Elements of Harmony can wash away Sombra's Permanent Enslavement Spell, the only issue is that nobody realized yet that you can use the Elements without needing the Elements.
I also think there's still hope that thanks to The Young Six or the Pillars having the same type of bond that the Mane Six have. Plus, they have some male members in both teams so it's not like Sombra's spell will work with them, eh?
As long as they either get the Elements or realize that the Magic of Friendship can be used without the Elements then Equestria is saved. Even if Sombra permanently corrupts both the Mane Six and the Alicorns.
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And Barb?
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i would like links please, i can’t seem to find it