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That was okay, but I think it needs a better ending. Like, when the sisters show up the next day and wonder if they've missed anything, or something. As it is, it's a little abrupt.
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I was thinking about writing a sequel after this that expands on a few more ideas. This was the first thing i’d written after months of not working on anything so i just wanted a little warm up to get me back in the swing of things :3
I agree, the ending does feel a bit rushed
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Please do!