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I can't wait till he meets Derpy and Dinky
This is what the quote reminded me of:
https://s3-us-west-1.amazonaws.com/soupmemes/ThanosImSorryLi-1549587032557.jpg
Any chance the name was inspired by Code Lyoko?
https://pm1.narvii.com/6318/c17752f40ac3abd8fdadb90ffa798e774e050efc_hq.jpg
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Well I'll be damned, you have a keen eye for references! XD I applaud you for your master of classics
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Lol yep, precious lil beans uwu
The problem with these kinds of stories is they devolve into stats and percentages and pictures. The story, the tale, the plot, becomes a secondary consideration. While this started well, Its devolved into spending 3/4 of the chapter explaining what things are and how they work.
While these have a following and I know for a fact that people love these, I just cant read these. I loose interest because its been three chapters of him just picking stuff up, and nothing happening to advance the plot. Three chapters.
I wont give this a thumbs down because these do have their following, but I'm out.
Monk
Boring read. Annoying protagonist. Delivery leaves me struggling to care about anything that's happening.
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Thank you for your criticism, I appreciate any and all input, negative or positive. I plan to steer gradually from the whole stat buff thing, think of it more like his starting equipment. Getting gear and such before adventuring out into the dangerous world.
From this chapter onward I intend to focus more on story rather than turning it into a gamer style story. If you ever find yourself curious feel free to swing around and check in now and then! :)
>gets canine companion
>doesn't name them Sif
Smh
(Tis a joke)
I really like where this is going! So far, this story has been an amazing read. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
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It makes me ecstatic to see that there are fans so excited to read my work! Feel free to send ideas or opinions my way! This story will have reasonable interaction with fans and all ideas will be taken into consideration!
i hate you pwinx!
so im out............hope the others enjoys reading this.