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El_President


Just a guy writing pony fics

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Where's Luna or Cadence specifically?

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Cadence is in the Crystal Empire, running it. Luna is in Canterlot and she'll show up later in the story for a bit.

I will definitely side with Luna to reveal this injustice.

In Celestia's head, anger had won the war. It had won with relentless fury, whose intensity was only matched by the sun itself. Nova Bloom. The name echoed within her own mind and she cemented it into her psyche. She needed to remember it for later. She was going to make sure this was nipped in the bud.

I can hear a tea kettle making noises

Celestia you evil, evil little mare.

Twilight is a Allicorn, Allicorns are immortal, why couldn't Celestia wait until Nova Bloom died!

Celestia is already a couple thousand years old, she couldn't wait another century?

"Understood, my princess." Spice bowed as the princess left. Once the princess was gone, he chuckled to himself. "Mares."

Why are they taking this lightly? There going to ruin someone's life over a little crush!

Immediately the rocketing boom of an explosion expanded around the field. Loud enough that most of Ponyville was sure to wake up from it. Debris rocked into the sky as the plume of the explosion followed. The whole plant was engulfed in a ball of orange fire. The employees did not even get a chance to scream as most of them were immediately torn apart from the explosion. The little office itself had been reduced to its bare foundations. All of the magitech generators were gone, absolutely destroyed. The base magic within them all was released and mixed with the fire, turning the flames blue. All that there was of the Ponyville power distribution plant was a fiery blue hell.

8 ponies died and 1 life will be ruined along with all the family members of those 8 ponies who died, hope Celestia is happy.

Good story, very depressing especially when you imagine you could be framed, this story made it seem so easy to frame someone.

Will there be a sequel? Would love to see one.

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I might make a sequel. I haven't really thought about it too much but there is definitely more material to play around with what I've set up here.

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