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LovelyFlowerBloom


Hi-Ho! I like writing stories. Trying to get better at it all the time :P

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3 Months after the defeat of Nightmare Moon, Aurora Shimmer, a student of Princess Celestia is sent to Ponyville in order to learn about the Magic of Love in a similar Manner to how Twilight Sparkle was sent to learn about the Magic of Friendship. While there, she will discover the true magic and harmony that comes with Love and Friendship.

This story is cancelled and currently awaiting a rewrite.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 24 )

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Honestly, I'm not too proud of it. It felt cluttered. I'm honestly disappointed in my writing for this fanfic in general. I'm used to creating linear stories rather than Slice of Life. This is my first time doing this kind of fanfic.

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Just wait until you read the next chapter.

An interesting story to read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

If Aurora Shimmer is studying love, then wouldn't it make more sense to make her the student of Princess Cadence?

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Since you mention it, I guess so. However, it wouldn't work for the current story I have planned. Cadence has been changed a bit for the story, but she has yet to appear.

Some shuffling is heard from inside the small house. The small, round door opens to reveal a little Breezie. The Breezie is blue with long, wavy, magenta hair that covers one of the Breezie's eyes. The Breezie lifts its little front leg to wipe the tired out of its eyes and looks up at Aurora, "Hvorfor alt oppstyret?"

it talks Danish? :rainbowderp:

6 cloaked ponies? one in front same magic aura as Aurora, as well as possibly being alicorn?
6 friends share similar yet different cutie marks?
raise a hoof who suspects its this story's mane 6 from future, when Aurora is an alicorn (can't be sure excectly of when, and there's possibly temp wing spell, which gives feathered instead of butterfly wings), creating a paradox so they all could get cutie marks in same event.
raises hoof, another. nope, raises all hoofs

*me when reading 2 last chapters* wow dialouges and conversations are sticking with each other. I got to take my eyes out.

Comment posted by Tania tokustar deleted Jul 30th, 2022
Comment posted by Tania tokustar deleted Jul 30th, 2022
Comment posted by Tania tokustar deleted Jul 30th, 2022

Starting and I hope from what I've read so far this isn't like a copy of the main story.

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