There was at one point a war of harmony against the evil that ravaged the land of Equestria. Many have fought and died in the frivolous pursuit for the divine power to rule all without cease. Once the war had ended, their badlands king had no choice but to submit to the Equestrian crown and ally himself with Celestia and Luna.
Not bad, has potential. My advice don't just carbon copy Ocarina of Time, mix it up a little.
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The same that I did for Majora's Mask. I'm still curious as to why it has so much hatred.
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Wait why did you do the sequel first?
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I don't know, actually. I guess I didn't really think about that. How about this, then, to give the reader a general idea of the kind of pony that Hero is?