• Member Since 2nd Nov, 2017
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PandaisQd


nonbinary person who ships technicolored ponies. Call me Clover

Comments ( 7 )

Ok, seriously friend. You need to work on spacing your paragraphs better. When characters are talking to one another. Don't have it all bunched up like this. It can be confusing to the reader at times. Because it's just a wall of text during the character introductions and whatnot.😅

11256445
that should be all fixed, mobile formatting oofed me. Fixed with computer hopefully, thank you! <3

11256445
I hope it's better now! HAaha! I've been busy so I hope my writing ain't faltering.

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