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FlurryHeart12354
Hey, I'm a Flurry Heart fan, she is my favorite character in Friendship is magic, My favorite character in New Generation is Sunny. so I make my stories based off of them and their friends.
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Hope you guys like it, it took quite a while to write the first chapter, but the next chapters will be just as awesome! Maybe even better, thank you all for baring with me.
"As Always, Smile Bright Like The Sun."
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it might need more chapters before I can judge this.
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Youre right, it will need more chapters, it will get there, eventually.
"As Always, Smile Bright Like The Sun."
tse4.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.lsH1LClpdPoSVXiQZYk_xAHaGt&pid=Api&P=0&w=186&h=169
ignore the haters
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Appriciate the encourage meant, it means allot, thank you! And yes, I will ignore the haters, people hate on things for no reason not realizing how much time, and effort I am going to be putting into this story. Also if you have any Ideas for other chapters please just let me know and I will consider them. Who knows, maybe they'll end up in a chapter. If they do, I will give credit to the people who gave the idea.
"As Always, Smile Bright Like The Sun."
tse4.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.lsH1LClpdPoSVXiQZYk_xAHaGt&pid=Api&P=0&w=186&h=169
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Previous story was not bad, allot have added it to favorites or watched me from it. No critisizm was made on that story, also this is just my style of writing, but ive always asked other times if anyone has ideas just share them and they'll be put into concideration, but instead i get critisized for my writing style. Also a lot of people do chapters less than 1000 words long, my usual word count is at least 300. And it is many POV's I just made a chapter of Izzy's POV, the writing style is the same as my other stories, never got hate on them. I stopped my others so i could start writing this one. Also sorry that my auto-correct turns "A lot" to "allot" then I forget to change it.
"As Always, Smile Bright Like The Sun."
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You should really find an editor
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Could use one, sadly i do not know any around where I live.
"As Always, Smile Bright Like The Sun."
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*Sprout.
Keep at it though! With a little more work, and some editing, you could have something great.