After events force them to move away from their homes, a pair of trouble making twins, two former web stars, and a juvinile con man come to live in a new place. A place populated by people who seem to be a bit different than the denizens of your average city. A place with a little more... magic.
These five also learn that the usual brand of wackiness in life hasn't totally left them. Rather, it adapts to their new home. With new and old accquiantences, romances and difficulties at school mixed in with mysterious new forces, one has to wonder if these guys will survive.
But with their new friends by their side, they'll learn that if you leave it all to them, they'll all have the "suite life" and everything will be just fine.
Co-authored with Alexanderulz339
Story takes place shortly before Friendship Games.
Suite Life belongs to Disney, Danny Kallis and Jim Geoghan.
iCarly and Sam and Cat belong to Nickelodeon and Dan Schneider.
Shouldn't there be a crossover tag?
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Thanks. I hadn't realized I hadn't included one. Problem's fixed
Haven't read it yet, but you should give each quote and paragraph and extra space from each other to make it a little easier on the eyes. I will likely update this comment with actual thoughts once I finish reading.
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All fixed! Thanks for mentioning that. I'll do it from now on.
Don't know why Celestia had to clarified. Luna's statement made it clear in plain English. Is Sunny bad at listening? Luna made herself clear I am not dumb to have the story have to tell me a plot point twice literally seconds after the first time.
Wants to keep it on the down low and says to deny if asked. Did the pressure get to him?
Uh yeah that's obviously what a counselor does. I hate being treated like an idiot that doesn't know basic things or able to understand plot points and have to be told twice by this story so far.
She barely known them for an hour.
Secret? No they were about to tell but due to time decided to save it. I figured you would understand since you interrupted interactions to continue yourself.
Free period. How does that work? I know seniors who get enough credits end up having to only attend half a day which was a god send for me personally, but I doubt this is what Rainbow has and I find it hard to believe she would have it. Just seems like a contrived reason to have her be here when she didn't really need to be. Wonder if this plot point will occur later or if it's just a one off thing just to have Rainbow here.
Aren't there rules against students wearing hats in class? Just a nitpick.
Freddie being a chick magnet while here Zack seems to be a casanova wannabe. Love it!
Not a fan of this gag with Pinkie but's it's more annoying here due to you not using properly. You are supposed to have her stun everyone with new knowledge one is hiding. Not recapping something everyone present already knows.
Annoyed at how hypocritical Sunset is. Even worse is they don't actually seem to be keeping secrets. At least not Zack and Cody. They simply couldn't because of time. Which is proven in this story when they told the cmc. Way to be the pot calling the silverware black Sunny.
Nice to be able to finally read it without getting lost in the one long paragraph. Solid start despite my minor issues. Will keep reading to see what else you have.
can you update please
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I will eventually. Life's just being really annoying and sucky right now. I've been trying to get a new job and haven't been having too much luck on that front.
It's been particularly difficult with my family. We're helping my grandparents move and we're dealing with the fallout, so to speak. They've lived in that house all their lives and now they're moving someplace they're unfamiliar with, even if it does pretty much have stuff they kind of NEED given their health. It's especially tough for my grandfather, who JUST turned 91! He's got a form of Parkinson's and it makes it difficult for him to move around and to remember some things. He's not gonna be happy living anywhere but his home, but we're gonna try and at least make it adequate for him, especially since we're fairly sure he's got only about a year or two left (MAYBE three.)
So yeah, it's a little difficult, but I'll try and get going on the next chapter eventually. Trust me.
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mayabe i can help
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How so?
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i can suggest idea for chapters
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Perhaps. Me and my co-author kind of alrady have a plan set out for the future chapters, but a few extra ideas (like gags and stuff) wouldn't hurt.
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oh ok
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so think we can talk on pm
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Sounds good.