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It's summertime! And Melody and her siblings, along with Pearl and Lucky, are off to Camp Little Hooves, Which their uncle Shining recently took over as director. With this being their first planned trip away from home and their parents, what will our favorite herd get up to?

With new friends, and Melody's new CMC duty to help her siblings earn their cutie marks, one thing's for sure. It'll be FUN!

If this story gets 25 likes I'll update Sparkling Storytime. :)

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what a surprise, love it!

And nice to see Lucky once more

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We'll be seeing her a lot this story

Meanwhile, in another cabin, Sunburst was introducing the Medley bros to their cabin mates. “This is Thunder Arrow, Refract, and Midnight Knight.” Sunburst said. “Guys, this is Lumber Striker, Trail Blazer, Lightning Shield, Light Wing, and Dark Wing.” Sunburst said.


is this character midnight knight the character i let you use I'm just curious cause so please don't ask cause i think its awesome that the medley kids are meeting a new character in the show and everything and thanks again for everything from writing these awesome stories to borrowing/using my OC to even collaborating with me on a story that i hope we can finish the first chapter soon and everything

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Yeah, that is the Character you let me use

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thanks i really like your stories and hey i was wondering feel like continuing our first collab chapter and everything

great to see two more of my oc's in it and a great start to the story wonder what is going to happen next time on melody ball z

that Kim Possible reference xD

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Where did you find that? If I might ask.

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with "What's the Sitch?" it was basically a catchphrase

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Oh. Lol.

I forgot Kim used to say that

hey captain_cosmos i was wondering for a future chapter to your stories do u think we could have midnight knight the changeling stallion fall in love with one of sparklers and twilight kids and everything just as a suggestion

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They’re only 5 right now.

So maybe in the future but not for a while.

“Yeah. The third triplet is a counselor here.” Refract responded.

Admit it.
You just can't let a story go without somehow adding ponies to Sparkler's family.
What do we have to expect more? An alicorn uncle? A batpony ancestor?

I hope it's a Kirin cousin next, tho

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I know it may seem like I can’t go a single story without revealing who may or may not be Sparkler’s family, but that’s just how the story progresses.

Kirin Cousin…let me just note that real quick.

wow, so much more to know about Sparklers family, intense I tell you, cant wait for more:heart::pinkiehappy:

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And what did Refract mean at the end? About that good thing about...comment? We'll just have to see.

The suspense is killing me :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:, *shaking uncontrollably*

“Relatively. Not TOO much bigger but it should be good for a clubhouse.” Shining explained. “Wanna show them to the FoalCave?” He asked Sunburst.

FoalCave sounds really ambiguous.
Especially after having specified that also Cadance was with them...

Aqua blinked, before breaking the silence that had befallen the room. “What the watering can are you talking about Refract?” She asked.

Love the reaction. I hoped that she wasn't on par with the rest lol

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Well you can’t expect all of them to have good memories eh? Plus, Fleur had Celestia to remind her of her connections.

“Archery?” Thunder Arrow asked.

yep that is perfect for him

also great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on melody ball z

wow i still love your stories but the suspense is killing me and it keeps on killing me every single time and everything

Well good thing they are at a camp. With HOW MANY foals each summer trying to get their cutie marks HOW did the CAMP survive or do they have a bigger reconstruction budget than Ponyville Concentrated CMC madness incoming

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Lol. I doubt any of the other foals were as insane as the CMC.😂

an interesting twist you got there

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on aqua ball z

dang, just how much bigger can this family get? its incredible, awesome chapter:heart:

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Guess you'll have to read on to find out. :)

i'm loving your stories still and everything there awesome and everything keep it up

“Your what?” Refract asked. “And I know more about you than you realize it would seem.” He added.

And yet you didn't know of her illness. What a great guard/observer/stalker/whateveryouare

“Because we cannot risk her having a magical breakdown and dying.” Refract responded simply. “She has already had two. And both times it really came down to the wire.” Refract responded.

She's long gone through a LOT more than "Sparkler, you have another sister" could do to her at this point. And without such breakdowns.
Again, you should go back to 101 class on observing people, you may need a refresh.

“So I missed the wedding. Just great.” Aqua pouted. “Stupid darkness, forcing us apart.”

Time to get a fine partner yourself, lass

Aqua nodded. “So, Sparkler and Fleur are doing alright…have you heard anything from the others?” She asked.

I swear, there are going to be more characters than chapters at the end of the story.

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Ok now to be fair, no one was watching Aqua like They are Sparkler since Sparkler was the only one Clear-Cut and Refract had a beat on location.

And I doubt I can come up with 180 different Characters. Lol.

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next time on melody ball z

Something tells me as the season goes on, we'll be seeing the family grow more and more, its so awesome and mystifying, love it to bits:heart:

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I'll ell you right now, There will be no more family members introduced this season, now, for the NEXT installment, anything is possible.

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Aaahhh, i see, still though, cant wait for more awesomeness XD

“My sister and her fiance are not raising sneaky little liars. And besides, I’ve gotten pretty good at detecting deceptions. Thanks to a certain enemy Changeling.” Shining responded.

Still burns, eh?

I’ll keep an eye on that guy. Refract thought.

either a noble enemy, or another Sparkler's relative, I bet.
Almost 90% of the characters are one of the two atm

Later that night, after everypony had gone to bed, Refract and Aqua wandered the woods surrounding the camp, Refract having told Aqua she needed to come with him

Wow, put a separator or something when you skip ahead

“Fleur De Lis has one too. As do your sisters that are currently MIA.”

Other sisters, uh?
What did you say about Frost being the last addiction to the family?

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To be fair, in episode 3 of this story Aqua DID ask about the others.

Also, I don't think 90% of them are one of the two. Lol.

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