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Raindrops Needs More Love80 stories ·223 members

Raining deep in heaven (cancelled)

Raindrops was an ordinary weather seraph in Ponyville, until she met 'The Butcher'. Now forced into the shadowy underworld of Equestria, Raindrops must try to salvage a new life for herself while desperately holding onto what humanity she has left.

Humanized FiM x World of Darkness crossover.

Thanks go out to Totallynotabrony for giving me some advice about this story and inspiring me with his vampire Cheerilee.

FiM ©Hasbro and World of Darkness ©White Wolf Publishing

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Lucky Seven

Lucky Seven #1 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · · Ch:1 ·

I like the Disturbed cover image of The Guy, so I'll give it a read later.

totallynotabrony

totallynotabrony #2 · Sep 18th, 2012 · · · Ch:1 ·

Okay, I'll give you my thoughts as I read:

Punctuation needs a little work. Things like "it's" versus "its" and comma placement.
A pair of pants is spelled jeans, not genes.
I honestly can't find much else wrong with it. Maybe people just don't like humanization.

Thegodhand