This story is a sequel to Batmane, the dark steed
Coco Pommel, despite having grown up with pony parents, despite the fact that she felt ponies as her brothers, her equals, knew that she was far from being a normal pony. During her youth, her physical abilities were strengthened, at 7 years old she was already stronger than an adult earth pony, soon after she discovered that she was faster than a pony should be, and her senses were prodigious.
After a turning point in her life, Coco has decided to travel the world in search of her place in it, her destiny. After a long time, she will find her role, she will become a symbol of hope, the mare of tomorrow... Supermare.
Note: the sex tag is for some slightly off-color character jokes, aside from that, there's nothing more to it, don't worry.
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
Why choose Coco Pommel to be Supermare?
11201194
First, I like Coco Pommel , second, I like to put My Little Pony characters as DC characters, and I couldn't find one for the role of Superman, and I didn't want to take an invented one. And since Coco didn't show her past of hers other than a little flashback of her in a play, I thought I'd sneak in.
I'm gonna love this! (Even if it's sci-fi, which makes my head hurt because I'm unable to understand sci-fi)
11201552
I hope so ! And don't worry, I'm going to focus more on Supermare, the action and the characters, the science fiction will only be limited to robots, spaceships and little else .
11201638
*gives a sigh of relief* That's good.
11201194
por que le copia a progiller un tipo de fanfiction https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13581250/1/Supermare
11201832
Porque... una pequeña pausa para generar tensión... Yo soy Progiller. Fue por Fimfiction que me anime a hacer historias en esa cuenta, pero después me anime a escribir aquí. Honestamente, la cuenta esa era tan poco visitada, y esta está en inglés, que jamás pensé que alguien se daría cuenta. Pero oye, eso me dice que al menos huvo gente que leyó esas historias. Pd: por si te lo estás preguntando, no haré un copia y pega, si te fijas, solo estoy tomando esa historia y cambiando cosas que ahora, con el conocimiento que he adquirido escribiendo, no me convencen. Como el prólogo de Krypton. Siento la confusión.
11201837
chanfle, disculpame ha decir verdad no esperaba que fueras progiller y yo que pense que estaba muerto hombRe XD
OYE Y VAS HA HACER LAS HISTORIAS DE APPEBLOM LOBO Y LAS TRES DIOSAS?
DIGO ME GUSTABA EL FIC DE LAS 3 DIOSAS PERO QUEDO EN HIATUS.
ADEMAS NO HAS CONSIDERADO HACER FICS ORIGINALES POR EJEMPLO UNA HISTORIA DE ANAKIN SKYWALKER EL ELEGIDO DE STAR WARS EN EQUESTRIA DIGO NO HAY NINGUN FIC DE ESO ADEMAS DE LA RELACION QUE ANAKIN TENDRIA CON OTROS PERSONAJES COMO LUNA O TEMPEST (PD: ANAKIN EN EQUESTRIA SIENDO PONI)
11202140
No pasa nada chaval, esos errores pasan, solo déjalo claro en tu comentario, por si acaso. Lo de los fics de Apple Bloom y las 3 diosas, el de Apple Bloom es seguro que puede, el otro, no estoy seguro, es un fic que hice en mis inicios como escritor y tiene cosas que ahora no me convencen nada. Y no te preocupes, pienso hacer cosas originales, con Anakin no se, pero con Star wars puede.
hola espero que estes bien por cierto no se si lo leiste te lo mande en privado
por cierto que opinas de la pelicula de the batman y del juego de skywalker saga y la peli de spiderman NWH
Should be Are.
Should be cutie.
Apart from that, this was a great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next.
I wonder which stallion would fit to be her “cousin” to be SuperStallion or SuperStud?
Anyways, interesting story so far. Can’t wait for more.
11203125
Corrected, thanks from the bottom of my heart. I'm glad you like it .
11203263
I'm still deciding if it will be a Supercolt or a Superfilly . We'll find out in a hypothetical sequel.
11203596
You're welcome! It was my pleasure.
11203599
Supercolt since it would be like she has a little brother to take care of.
11203636
A good idea, we'll see what we'll do.
I recommend Pipsqueak to be the cousin for Coco.
Btw I totally see you just copying Man of Steel here not like 100% but I see what your doing
Wasn't he destroyed with the rest of Krypton?
This made me think he was Neighsay. XD
11204444
Yes, but in the first chapter it is made clear that he transmitted his mind to the command key. That's what it is, think of it as a self-aware super advanced artificial intelligence.
11204151
If I bring in a cousin, it will surely be an invention, since Superman's cousin came when he was already established, Coco hasn't even started. And as for Man of Steel... Yes, a little bit . I really liked his ship designs and technology, and honestly, I like the idea of the Fortress of Solitude being an ancient Kryptonian ship rather than one made of crystals, in my opinion.
11204490
Okay.
buenas amigo no te preocupes entendemos que la vida te de problemas de por si a mi me da paja escribir maginate tu escribiendo 3000
palabras
You can do it, Coco
Up in the sky! is it a bird or plane?
Oh Twilight
I wonder what that means…
Sorry about your lost…
Take your time man. No rush, btw if you need Superman lore watch the old 90’s cartoon because that’s one of the best Superman shows ever made.
11213728
Let's just say that she couldn't allow Rainbow to be that fast without some restraint, at least for now .
And thank you, little by little I am recovering.
The Superman thing, I don't know where to find it in Spanish, because I remember that I am a Spanish writer who uses a translator and a minimum knowledge of English, I doubt that I can watch a series in perfect English. But I have found good sources, the Man of Steel movie, The Man of Tomorrow and the Superman comics earth one that I read back in the day have helped me a lot.
11213972
I think HBO has a translation? I’ll check it later today to see if it does
11214049
Believe me, even if I had it, it's not there, I already looked at it. Streaming services have a bad habit of putting exclusive series for some countries, and I hope that does not include the new mlp series because otherwise I will be very angry.
Really weird time for Rainbow to drop the F-bomb, honestly.
I guess Ink and Coco will have a night talk like in the first Superman film?
11222821
We'll find out in the next chapter .
Fluttershy's name is not Fluttershy Breeze.
Applejack's name is neither Applejack Macintosh nor Applejack Bloom.
Twilight Sparkle's name is not Twilight Sparkle Armor.
Rarity's name is not Rarity Belle. So cut it out, people.
11226748
I know, but that's how it is in my headcanon, and I like it, plus, it's not something that ruins the experience of this story. You can get mad about this or assume that it will only be done for official things or with characters that are educated in the series like Rarity and move on. Anyway, thanks for giving your opinion and I hope you respect mine, regards!
hola perdon por no hablarte antes lamento la perdida
espero que te encuentres bien, buen capitulo por cierto.
Por cierto va ha salir brainiac?
Great chapter
I ship Coco and BlueBlood. I think those two do great
Huh I thought Coco’s parents would had hidden the ship but I guess Celestia went and got it.
11236747
In Batmane's epilogue, Celestia is shown to sense the Fortress of Solitude's energy awakening and to have Supermare's ship stowed away. Think about it, Jor-El wouldn't want her daughter to die because no one found her, so he made sure someone did.
11236953
I haven’t read the Batman yet. But that’s cool
There’s always an evil Lex isn’t there
Nice chapter just waiting till we get go Batmane vs Supermare
If you need a break to do a new story it’s fine man.
I like Twilight and Spike relationship being brother and sister
11270253
And I'm glad, it seems to me another nice relationship, but I prefer the one between mother and son. I like to write relationships like that.