I'm up to chapter 4 after the general set the rules and the final one stuck out to me "under no circumstance will you engage in sexual intercourse with them" then i reread your tags and saw that "sex" was one of your tags. Then i started thinking how you characterized Anon. He seems like a straight laced if emotionally detached person.
So i have to ask will there be actual sex with him and a pony later in the story or are you only adding the "sex" tag just to make sexual innuendos and sex jokes with sexual teasing thrown in?
Because if so and you are just using it for that only, then you can remove the "sex" tag and change it to "fetish" instead and still maintain everything you've established so far and whatever you plan for the future chapters of the story and it won't change a thing. Heck you could drop it down to a "Teen" rating and not change a thing
11295835 Spoiler Warning: read at own risk. Without giving to much away, all I can say is that even if one does not seek out sex for their own pleasure they may still use it as a tool when it comes to others that do. All I'll say for now is that Anon knows how to manipulate people and ponies and will use any means to do it, however he does not do so with malicious intent.
Why isn't there a slice of life tag?
great chapter
This is a fun read so far, can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm up to chapter 4 after the general set the rules and the final one stuck out to me "under no circumstance will you engage in sexual intercourse with them" then i reread your tags and saw that "sex" was one of your tags. Then i started thinking how you characterized Anon. He seems like a straight laced if emotionally detached person.
So i have to ask will there be actual sex with him and a pony later in the story or are you only adding the "sex" tag just to make sexual innuendos and sex jokes with sexual teasing thrown in?
Because if so and you are just using it for that only, then you can remove the "sex" tag and change it to "fetish" instead and still maintain everything you've established so far and whatever you plan for the future chapters of the story and it won't change a thing. Heck you could drop it down to a "Teen" rating and not change a thing
Still good setup now let's see the payoff
11295835
Spoiler Warning: read at own risk.
Without giving to much away, all I can say is that even if one does not seek out sex for their own pleasure they may still use it as a tool when it comes to others that do. All I'll say for now is that Anon knows how to manipulate people and ponies and will use any means to do it, however he does not do so with malicious intent.