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Holocron


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This story is very nice~.

Hopefully, it won't end up as one of those "bad" Zebra stories that I have seen many times.

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Yea I'm hoping the same for this fic

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Thank you for having the same notion. I just find it eerily that these Zebra stories are similar to the Caribou from Fall of Equestria verse.


Just insert different species dominioning and sex slaving the mares.

Nice, can’t wait for the next chapter!

Will this be monthly like Kwa Rushwa?

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No, chapters will be released as soon as they are written. :twilightsmile:

“You understand how utterly foolish you have been?” Hekima commented, sighing heavily as his son only shrugged his shoulders, taking another sip of his drink. “Again, must I remind you, this negotiation is very, very…fucking sensitive!” His voice raised as he spoke, only to calm as he composed himself. “It has taken far too many resources, and far too much time to secure. And I will not see our people’s success be destroyed by your libido!”

“Father, it’s fine.” Joka’la said, gesturing over to the mares. “It was a nameless guard and some servants. I highly doubt anyone would’ve noticed.”

“Are you willing to risk everything I have done for this?” Hekima asked, his voice still harsh and angry. “Regardless, it seems I have to keep a much tighter grip on your actions while these proceedings take place.”

“Woah, woah, let’s not be too hasty!” Joka’la said, nearly dropping his drink as he got up. “Alright, alright, I’ll be more careful. I just figured a few nameless mares wouldn’t matter. It’s not like I’m fucking the Princess!”

“Don’t you dare even speak that, even as some passing remark.” Hekima snapped, raising a finger towards his son. “I will not even have the seeds of such thinking grow in your mind. Am I understood!” Joka’la only nodded, looking away from his father. “Good. We have more and more work to do, and Princess Celestia is a skilled speaker. So I must focus my efforts on securing a deal with her. Do not let me hear of this again.”

I don't get on why he is so mad at his own son's libido, when he is LITERALLY doing the same thing to Celestia herself, and this ain't the first time either. What a damn hypocrite, he is. Hekima needs to get off his "high horse". :ajbemused:

He probably kept his relationship a secret from his son

Amazing chapter! Hope we can see more of Hekima and Celestia too, maybe how they started their relationship.

“Joka’la…” Hekima’s words trailed off as he took another, much harder take of the hookah before exhaling almost a cloud of smoke. “He’s still young and bold. He beds any mare he can sink his claws in, and I worry he will ruin all we have tried to do.”

“He doesn’t seem any bolder than you were when we first met.” Celestia added, adjusting herself again as she cuddled up a little more, this time snuggling next to the zebra. “Maybe he just needs the right guidance…and time.”

“Time is not on our side.” Hekima replied, passing the hookah to Celestia. “I only hope he doesn’t cause too much trouble while you and I have our time together.”

Hekima, you're not exactly in the "mortal high ground" when your just as "dirty" with Celestia. :unsuresweetie: :ajsmug: :duck: :rainbowkiss:

Good chapter! I love how the mares can’t resist Joka’la.

Oh, what might have caused this waiting for him? Maybe some history repeat perhaps? Like father, like son?

Cant wait to read more from you!

“Of course, I would love to.” Joka’la replied, holding Luna close to him as they snuggled in her bed. “There we go, I’m happy I got to do this with you.” Luna only cooed, shivering as she enjoyed being held like this. Though she couldn’t see it, the zebra’s lips were curled into a wicked smile, he had won!

You sly dog ( Or Zebra specifically. )! :moustache: :trollestia:

Fantastic chapter (and revelation, I think there was a hint in the first or second chapter). Can’t wait to see the next one.

Oh things are getting interesting. Now to wait and see what the talk with Love-booty reveals to us readers...:derpytongue2:

I like that this story doesn't take the stereotypical zebradom path; Joka'la and Luna are cute together.
as are his father and celestia

A nice reveal, and some interesting inherited trait info there. Waiting for more and actually interested to see maybe potential bonus about Hekimas and Celestias first meeting (writers decision of course).

Damn with how sluty you write Cadance, I can only imagine how someone like Chrysalis would be portrait in this story of yours.

Love how Joka treated Cadance, like the little cheating temptress she is.

What does Joka'la mean?

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Something with Dragon, I don't fully remember

Cadance is such a good whore but with standards, those lesser stallions won’t get to breed her but si wonder if one the zebras will.

“Of course, let’s enjoy ourselves for a bit and head back.” Joka’la commented, hugging Luna close as the two started to leave. “I love you.”

If Cadence ever finds out that this guy made a false love confession to her aunt of all people, they will never even find his corpse.

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An insulting word for a weak man, often used when the man is being cheated on, or when the man watches their lover being fucked by a better partner.

Joka’la, you sneaky and clever bastard you~~~. You and Luna are made for each other. :ajsmug:

And Cadence is a sneaky and clever bitch too. :trollestia:

P.S. I'm surprised that he doesn't get a very good boobjob/titfuck out of Luna as of yet? Considering her Top A++ "figure" from that Picture.

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That's a very good point. I'll have to consider that for the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

The breeding talk on the chapter was fantastic! Joka really made Luna his broodmare.

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Yes, I look forward to boobjobing/titfucking in the next chapter.

“Oh shit…so soft…” Joka’la huffed a little, smirking down at Luna. “I don’t think you ever did this for me.”

Haha, finally! Thank you. :trollestia: :moustache:

Standing at the edge of the bed, arms crossed in front of her, looking down at the couple who had spent a passionate amount of time fucking and breeding in her bed, was Princess Celestia. The solar monarch only stared at the two, her eyes seemingly devouring every inch of the two. She wasn’t mad, she didn’t even curl her brow in an annoyed manner. But equally, she wasn’t exactly happy to see her sister and son in her bed, and especially not naked and with clear evidence of fucking.

Wait, what!? :rainbowderp:

“The four of us?” Joka’la asked, raising a curious eyebrow, but then his answer came as he looked across the room. Standing in the doorway, shock and yet not disappointment was across his face was Hekima. “Father?!”

“Hello, son.” Hekima sighed, shaking his head a little as he gazed at Joka’la. “It seemed you were right about this, Celestia. We should’ve told him sooner.”

“Wait, wait, what are you talking about?” Joka’la asked, almost falling off the bed as he was getting out of it. He was so caught up by this moment, he nearly forgot he was still naked. “Father, what are you saying?”

“Joka’la, it’s time you learned the truth.” Hekima commented, walking to stand beside Celestia. The mare only nodded at him, consenting to what was to come next. With a low sigh, the older zebra continued. “Son, Princess Celesita is your mother.”

Obi-Wan: Wait a minute, how did this happen!? We're smarter than this. :applejackconfused:

Anakin: Apparently not. :ajbemused:

Basically, us readers should have seen this reveal coming, but probably didn't!?

What a way to drop a bomb

Damn, right on a cliffhanger. Can’t wait to see the next chapter.

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Cuckold
A cuckold is the husband of an adulterous wife; the wife of an adulterous husband is a cuckquean. In biology, a cuckold is a male who unwittingly invests parental effort in juveniles who are not genetically his offspring.

Have you used Joka'la in your stories before?

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Nope, only this one. I've written so many zebra stories, I'm always afraid of accidently crossing names lol

Nicely done. This one is one of the best zebradom stories I have read. Wonderful what happens to the mares Joka’la breed in the first chapters though.

Nice ending for those two. I wonder how Celestia is doing? Or what kind of shenanigans Luna's firstborn might get into? Maybe getting together with Flurry? Who knows?...

This really was quite enjoyable ride! For more than a year you wrote this amazing story and I’m very thankful. Hopefully you will write more zebradom stories.

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Well, my slots are always open, so hopefully people commission them. They are fun to write. :twilightsmile:

Thank you for accepting my commission and congrats on the completion of the story. looking forward to working with you in future stories

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