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Holy shoot, this is the longest chapter I’ve ever seen in my life.😱
Also, it’s great to see you again Blacklight.🙂
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Ok, ok. You're not the only one having issues with writing. I’m somehow more effective with PMing and giving tips a facts; mostly about ruling a nation.
Holy Shit!!!! Over 50,000 words in the first chapter!?
Mad respect!
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Thank you.
Though it took way too much time.
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How many chapters will this have? Because, it seems that with just only the first chapter, several pony problems like getting rid of that Sun Princess bitch permanently, and punishing Shining and Blueblood is already solved.
P.S. I know Lincoln is "only" with Octavia, for now. But, I'm NOT against seeing him with Loona ( Eventually. Because adoption is technically isn't incest. ), Sky, and possibly Selene.
Him being with Twilight or Fluttershy is going to be difficult to even happened? ( Considering that those two are on my GOOD list. Pinkie and Applejack are mixed. While Rarity is near the bottom, and Rainbow is most definitely on the "Bad/Naughty" list. Hopefully, Starlight and Trixie will make a better impression. )
Also, the Young Six will make a better first impression and possibly be Lincoln's real friends than the Mane Six ever was. ( The Mane Six are on thin ice as it is. But, I do hope they will finally "mature" as characters and be on Lincoln's and Loona's good sides finally? )
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I'm not sure how many chapters, but I'll make them as much as life let's me.
The reason why Lincoln loves Octavia to death is because of personal reasons. while Sky and probably Selene are good for Lincoln's desires, I don't think Lincoln would fuck his own adoptive mother since he doesn't see her like that.
Only Loona has issues with some of the Main 6 since they annoy her more so than Blitzø and Moxxie with their immaturity. And yes, its possible she would get along with the Young 6 since Smolder and Gallus like her vulgar humor.
Was there a story before this one? Because if there was, I wanna read it and find out what adventures they have been through.
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This story takes place after the Qliphoth Incident. Its basically an alternate version of what happens after Devil May Cry 5. So no, I didn't made a story that takes place before this story.
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Ah, dammit, I wanted to see what kind of crazy shit they get into. Especially after so many mentions about the past in this 1 chapter alone.
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Because most of the stuff in the past doesn't really involve MLP characters.
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Could posy it on another site, like WP or FF.
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*post
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Uhh, I actually don't have a story in any of those sites.
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Why not? At least those sites let ya post something about anything.
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I tried making a story on FF but that attempt failed. But I haven't attempt it on WP yet.
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Oh. Well damn.
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But the flashbacks will tell why the non-MLP became what they became.
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That's good to know.
Question. Can anyone use your OC for their own stories
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That depends on which story its gonna be about and they need my permission.
Just message me about the details and you'll get my answer.
You are talking about Nero, huh?
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I highly doubt that Loona would take "no" as a answer. And I admit, Loona does has a super sexy and hot body after all. Sssoooo, time will tell.
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Well Lincoln's objection still stands, despite how much of a goth MILF Loona is.
And yes, I did meant the canon Nero when I did mention "certain dead weight".
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Damn! That sucks.
And I slightly remember why you dislike canon Nero. Can you care to remind me?
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Dude. Why are you obsessed with Loona getting boned by her own adopted son?
I don't hate Nero character-wise. If anything I prefer Nero over that emo prick that is Fake Dante.
I'm just never a big fan of him gameplay-wise because in Devil May Cry 5, they just nerfed his DMC4 gameplay and made him the weakest playable character, second only to V. And the Devil Breakers are just a handicap.
There's a reason why the real Dante called him dead weight.
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Then why make her into a super hot MILF in the first place? She is a great wolf character like Roxanne Wolf from Fnaf. Just saying.
And who do you gonna pair her with anyway? Dante and Vergil are off the table. I doubt any morally good/nice stallion character is good enough, or has the "balls" to handle her. Maybe Spike?
Yeah, you are referring to the "reboot" Dante.
P.S. I'm gonna eventually get the main five DMC games in the next Microsoft/Xbox store discount bargain sale. Is it "alright" IF I might get the reboot as well? Since that's also on sale.
And look, I already know about your "opinion" with the reboot. But I seen the reviews, and despite that the reboot has the ire of hard-core DMC fans. The reviews are actually great/good in gameplay-wise. So?
Was that your only criticism of DMC 5?
Burn! But makes sense.
Any, besides that this is a DMC Crossover. Is there some DOOM/Wolfenstein/Quake, Asura's Wrath, God Of War, Metal Gear Rising: Revengence, and Darksiders stuff mix in?
I would have probably suggested Hitman and Ace Combat. Since their also PlayStation Games ( Despite having them on Xbox 360 E/Xbox One S ). But your not into those.
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Loona does "play" around with her son at times, but no actual fucking because he still says no to that.
Of course I got the Roxanne Wolf reference.
Spike's off the table since he's 15.
I recommend getting the five main Devil May Cry games. And as for the "reboot", I recommend watching White Void Jojo's playthrough videos about that game because he goes into more detail on that game.
If those reviews are from IGN, then their opinions are invalid.
Outside of not having vital & devil stars and holy water in the game, and Nero loosing his Devil Bringer, the game's great.
Some of the dialogue comes from Helluva Boss, Hellsing & Hellsing Ultimate, and Bleach.
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It wasn't from that typical IGN lying bullcrap. The reviews are from other gamers/buyers from the Microsoft/Xbox Store, from my own Console.
Well, guess Spike won't be with Rarity either. Sadly for him. Be better off with the CMC, Ember, Gabby, or Smolder.
So, who do you think is "perfect" for Loona? And for being a BETTER Father Figure for Lincoln. Because we all know how Vergil is like.
And that's too bad of never seeing our demons-killing heroes use some of Agent 47's weaponry and tools. Or uses OP Aircraft from ace combat.
Maybe see some Doom and Darksider Demons to make it a lot more interesting. After all, those stupid agents have a working hell portal.
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I'm not planning on shipping Spike with anyone. And as for Loona, she gave up on dating just to be with her son.
Lincoln already has father figures without his mother being romantically involved. Stolas being one of them.
Devil arms and blessed tip guns work better since most demons can't be killed with conventional weapons.
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Okay, makes sense. But, Doom and Darksider's weapons could work. And facing those versions of the demons as well.
So those two are just loners then? No shipping and love life!?
Oh well. I give up!
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Its not like Loona's lonely. Its just that she doesn't have any time to date and she's happy with being a mom.
As for Spike, he grew out of the Rarity smitten phase.
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Okay.
So, is Mission 2/Chapter 2 gonna be up soon?
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It will. I'm just having difficulty writing some of the fight scenes.
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Good news, today is now my 23rd birthday. And I got some good games like FNAF 1-5 core collection, Uncharted 1-3 remastered/Nathan Drake collection. Getting Uncharted Legacy of Theives later on. Got Stellaris PS5 console version, and some of it's dlc's. And some good gift cards for more stuff.
Bad news. I sadly didn't get the DMC games. The sale ended earlier than I thought. And I got the gift cards late, after the sale ends. Hopefully, another sale will soon come again.
And I will check out White Void Jojo's review for the DMC reboot.
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At least you still got some new games as well as the DLCs and new gift cards. So it wasn't like a total loss or something.
What's your progress?
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Almost done. But I was planning on doing a one-shot story in the side.
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Another one? What's that one about? And why is it a one-shot?
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Not doing spoilers this time.
Bah fuck you andrelphus
First, how does Twilight know that Andrealphus had a claw in that? And second, what is he talking about with Celestia?
Are you FRICKIN serious!? This again!?
I don't know whether I'm be upset that you copied this "plot twist" from your other stories like the Prototype crossover. Or a bit happy that MAYBE the Real Celestia isn't a OOC bitch in this story. Hopefully!!!
P.S. I want Rarity to get karma for what she did to Spike.
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Discord, that's how. The Lord Of Chaos let it slip.
Andrealphus basically imprisoned Celestia in Tartarus, and basically crushed her PR and ruling grip in Equestria in order to make way to rebuild the Ars Goetia and start a war.
And as for Celestia herself. A bitch? No. Incompetent? Yes.
And don't worry, Rarity will get what's coming to her.
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Okay. And what does PR stand for? I don't know what that means?
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Public Reputation.
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Oh, make sense. And how would Twilight, Selene, Cadence, the Mane Five, and everybody else react that it wasn't the real Celestia from before? Will they be some apologies from the misunderstanding?
( Although, I think Shining Armor is still a douchebag in here, right? )
And does Lincoln, Loona, Octavia, Millie, Spike, Nico, and the others have a way better first impression with the real Celestia, than before with the fake bitch one?
( Even IF the real Celestia is incompetent, at least she ain't a total racist/xenophobic bitch like the fake one, right!? )
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Let's just say the ponies and other creatures will be in total shock. And yes, Shining is still a douchebag, he's still in the infirmary.
As for the DMC crew that are currently in Equestria, they would be skeptical of Celestia.
And both Lady and Trish didn't join in to go through the portal.
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My mistake then. I just seem them regularly use the Rocket Launchers/RPG's in this new chapter. And that was Lady's ( Mary ) main weapon choice.
Also, this story has a very long way to go. Because if I remember correctly. Most of the DMC games has over 20 Mission stories or something similar. ( Not to mentioned the special/secret missions. )
DMC 1 - 23 main missions, 12 special missions.
DMC 2 - 18 Missions ( Dante ), 13 Missions ( Lucia ), and some secret rooms.
DMC 3 - 20 Main Missions, 12 Secret Missions.
DMC 4 - 20 Main Missions, 12 Secret Missions.
DMC Reboot - 20 Main Missions ( Dante ), 6 DLC Missions ( Vergil ), 21 Secret Missions.
DMC 5 - 20 Main Missions ( Prologue included ), 12 Secret Missions.
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Another thing I want to point out is that Loona made Sombra scared of her.