I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all, I see it all
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This was great, but you've got a few mistakes.
1. It should be borrow
2. It should be I'm
3. It should be Maretime Bay
4. I'm
5. forgot
6. In isn't needed
7. It's
8. I'm
9. I'm
10. You should put 'The Sprout'
11. Sprout
12. Won't
13. More isn't needed here
14. Sprout
15. 'The Sprout'
16. Sprout
17. Sprout
18. exhales
19. A large breath isn't needed here
20. there's
21. Instead of a comma it should be a full stop.
22. Remember to put 'He'
23. It should be 'the door to his room which is opened'
24. And shouldn't start with a capital letter.
25. It should be a full stop instead of a comma.
26. It should be every time instead of every-time
27. There should be a full stop instead of a comma
28. Remember to put 'No'
29. shower head instead of shower-head
30. stallion instead of Stallion
31. know instead of now
32. Like is not needed here
33. won't instead of wont
And one last thing. You forgot to mark this as complete.
11147587
Thank you for writing all the mistakes!
I have fixed them all now
11147965
You're welcome. I'm happy to help :)