A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)
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Aria Blaze wakes up in Twilight's lab one morning, and wonders how she got there.
Will the other Aria be able to tell her?
(Because entering a T-rated sex comedy into a clopfic contest is exactly the sort of thing I would do.)
Content Warning: sex (implied), crude language, and maybe an implied hangover I guess?
Also an entry into Bicyclette's Self-Shipping Contest, because why not?
Prereaders: RDT. You have my thanks! 
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Entertaining stuff, but it feels like the fic's trying to bend over backwards to justify its own existence. The paradox here is that Twilight's uncertainty in herself is projected onto the narrative as a whole, and her crippling self-consciousness infects it in turn. It's a fun, goofy story that's taking itself way too seriously, at least in terms of trying to make itself make sense. Also, some of the intended humor just drag on for too long with minimal variation. Twilight's not confident. Aria's a bitch. These are established. Now what?
... Okay, that's way too much given how much the story made me smile. Still, I hope it's plentiful food for thought. Best of luck in the judging for both contests.
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Thanks! I might be able to use some of this to improve future stories (imho hardly anyone can easily apply everything immediately.)
Awesome read
Hahaha! That was a fun (and sexy) romp!
Someone please put a leash on Sci-Twi (NOT IN THAT WAY!)
Not my proudest fap. :)
All jokes aside, good luck in the contest!
Wait this isn't a Super Trampoline story where am I?
With a title like that, how could you not read it?
What, in the actual f^ck, did I just read.
Because that was genuinely pretty hilarious.
This is stupid and hilarious and I love it and if I think about this too hard I'll want to write fanfic of your fanfic.
This is hilarious....now imagine having both Arias having to put up with Sonata.
This story unfortunately could've used some more time in the oven. The premise seems fun, but the execution lacks substance and focus, with all of the characters seeming rather 2-dimensional while also zipping between scenes, cutaways, and flashbacks so fast that it's hard to string together a coherent narrative.
Bonus points for having the balls to write a T fic for this contest, though.
Thank you for contribution!
hehe, that's right, her name was indeed something like that
that would def be my reaction too
fascinating interpretation of the girls' magical powers
phrasing!
this does read like extremely bad Sci-Twi flirting, yes
this is quite ironic given all that has transpired
well, that certainly was a very strange idea with a very strange execution, and is indeed one way to get two copies of Aria Blaze to make out with each other. i admit, if it was intended as a comedy, that part didn't quite land for me! Aria's character here felt too predictable for that, if that makes sense. but on the other hoof, i read Rarity's speech about Sci-Twi to be an unironic statement about her wrongness here, and this story overall as a deconstruction on the quirky and socially awkward mad scientist teen character, and what it must feel like to be a side character in a world that is truly hers. if this was the intended interpretation, it worked very well!