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Venomking
i do not know how edit my profile outside image well i guest no explanation to why i am a Fluffy flearon for a profile
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Yeah... just from the summary, I can tell your command of the English language is terrible.
Easiest decision to skip a story I ever made.
get a proof reader you're English was really bad and hard to follow
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like point out school teaching me literacy was not that good
but school did not care because 99% of my time in other classes wear As
But Literacy/English was C to Rare B+ depending
The English here is really bad. The grammar is so wrong that some sentences are hard to understand or just don't make sense.
Also at this point a proof reader won't be enough. You need an English speaking co-writer. If writing (in English) is something you really want to pursue than you need to improve your English speech comprehension. I suggest reading a lot of books/stories and be active in forums/write lots of comments and pay attention to grammar.
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i used Grammar tool keep it going and again i speak English i just suck at spelling in English ever way thanks for feed back
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Spelling is simple. Most, if not every browser automatically checks your spelling. Grammar is the issue here. Grammar tools just don't work (yet) because English grammar like with most languages is just very illogical and has many rules and irregularities. To my knowledge there is no system yet which can do proper grammar.
I'm not trying to be offensive, I'm just trying to explain that even your comments sound worse than Yoda's speech patterns. There simply is no alternative to proper language comprehension yet.
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i get what you say ever way i am going use this improve my spelling but glamor suggestions from spell check not best i guest i should stop realigning on it till then thank you for opening my eyes