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Adamverse

I care deeply about Equestria; in my stories I help their world. So when your writing about all the villains coming to harm the Mane 6; remember this, they...are...defended.

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Rarity tags along with Fancypants when he takes a trip to Las Pegasus.

However, the trip is put on hold when a ghost from the past returns for revenge.

As Iron Heart, Rarity must protect the innocent from this 'Ghost' who's holding a grudge.
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Complete Published: Aug 8th, 2022 Download
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MatTheBook
MatTheBook #1 · Aug 8th, 2022 · · 1 · Out of the Blue ·
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So...

Twilight - Spider-Girl
Applejack-Spider-woman

Rarity - Iron man


whats next??

Herald of Opera
Herald of Opera #2 · Aug 8th, 2022 · · · Out of the Blue ·
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11325169
Ironheart is actually a separate superhero because someone else was already the Iron Lady.

Charlie_K
Charlie_K #3 · Aug 8th, 2022 · · 1 · Out of the Blue ·
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Still better than what Disney/MCU wants to do with Iron Heart in their next production.

Adamverse
Adamverse #4 · Aug 8th, 2022 · · · Out of the Blue ·
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11325169
Don't forget Adam, Spiderman.

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #5 · Aug 8th, 2022 · · 1 · Out of the Blue ·
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Suddenly, three Mark 4 Combat Drones shot right past Iron Heart; they were heading right for the plane. Iron Heart ignited her thrusters and flew back up towards the plane; it was time for her first solo mission as a superhero.

Lets do this!

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #6 · Aug 19th, 2022 · · 1 · Hostel Takeover ·
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When Iron Heart landed, Ghost ran towards her and began to glowing green again; but Rarity could attack, the Ghost ran right through her, like an actual ghost. She then conjured one of her holo-spears again, and threw it at a fuse box.

There must be a 'before'

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #7 · Aug 19th, 2022 · · 1 · Hostel Takeover ·
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Ghost was cut off when the new guy wanted to announce himself; he cried out, “THE LIVING LASER!!!”

Living Laser????

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #9 · Aug 25th, 2022 · · 1 · Uncanny Valley ·
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Jumping onto the side of the large container, Ghost saw Spider-Girl shoot some web at one of the cables holding the container.

oohh!! Reference!

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #10 · Aug 25th, 2022 · · 1 · Uncanny Valley ·
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When the hero reached the dam, she saw Ghost lying on the ground; but what really caught her eye, was Ghost’s mask lying beside her. Iron Heart picked up the mask, she then looked down at the villain and stated, “It’s over Ghost.”

Ghost rose to her feet, she turned her head to Rarity, giving the hero a good look at her face; when Rarity saw the face, she muttered, “Wallflower Blush?”

https://youtu.be/d2FdC8Ut02Y

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #11 · Sep 7th, 2022 · · · Rock Bottom ·
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Iron Heart explained, “Yeah, I’m not like you.” Rarity then reached for Wallflower’s mask, “But I will take this.” She grabbed the mask and crushed it in her hands. Wallflower watched her life’s work shatter into fragments; she looked back up at Rarity in anger.

Reminds me of Big hero 6

Adamverse
Adamverse #12 · Sep 7th, 2022 · · · Rock Bottom ·
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11354921
I know, I wasn't trying to copy it, it's just a coincidence.

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #13 · Sep 7th, 2022 · · · Rock Bottom ·
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11355013
OK!!

JUST WHO HAS A PROBLEM WITH ME!?

MatTheBook
MatTheBook #15 · Sep 7th, 2022 · · · Rock Bottom ·
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11355102
I swear im being followed just to receive this for nothing!!

👎

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #16 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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With nothing holding her up, Rarity began to fall back to Earth; she screamed like crazy when this happened, she began her dissent back to the surface.

Dissent = disagree.
Should be "descent"

:trollestia:

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #17 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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When he walked into the room, he was holding something in his hands; he took that something over to one of the boxes that was piled up in the corner, there were quite a few boxes there. Rarity walked over to see what it was, it was a revolver gun and it’s bullets, in a small display case; Fancy Pants opened the box and place the gun inside. “My father always told me to stick to your guns; we did it his way for too long, now it’s time to let the past go.” After saying that, he closed the lid of the box.

Possibly the most common error in writing English. Nouns indicate possessive form with an apostrophe. Pronouns do not.

Should be "its". Spellcheck doesn't catch this because "it's" is a valid word, it's just the WRONG valid word.

:applecry:

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #18 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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“No So very formal.” Rarity said back, but still smiling at his charm.

:raritystarry:

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #19 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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“Bittersweet.” Fancy Pants took the cover of off and showed her, it was a round device with a large power button in the middle. He picked up the device and pushed the power button, it then started to hover in the air; once it got high enough, it projected something underneath it.

You can get a free proofreader in The Proofreader Group.

:trollestia:

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #20 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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Rarity looked at the hologram, it was cross between a man and a cat, wearing only a long red coat. Capper looked around, he looked up and saw the remaining particles of the combat drones; he surprised surmised as to why they were blown up.

:trollestia:

SWEETOLEBOB18
SWEETOLEBOB18 #21 · Dec 31st, 2022 · · · Intro ·
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Rarity walked over to Capper, when the cat saw her approaching, he said to her, “You know, he spoke very highly of you when we worked together; I was almost jealous he got.....to...... hang out with you and I didn’t. But of course he’s something that I’m not.”

I only finished proofreading this chapter because I'm not as bad as Sheldon Cooper but I'm a bit compulsive. You REALLY need a proofreader.

:trixieshiftleft:

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