What do guards do when they get bored? Let's find out!
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a short but lovely story!
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Thanks. :D
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you're welcome
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:)
OK, this was a fun read. Have a thumbs up.
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Thanks! :D
Nice. I got some chuckles out of this story. Especially at this exchange.
I don't think I've ever seen anyone take the expression "let's get this party started" literally before, so the joke was a nice touch.
However, one thing I should point out is that the punctuation following the dialogue was often incorrect, usually with commas that should be here, such as in the part I quoted. It should be this:
That aside, this was a nice, amusing story.
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Thanks. :D
Is Shadowlance also a bat pony?
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Yes, he is.
You'll probably get fired by this.
If I had any doubt you were having a death wish before I'm sure about it now.
Nice story!
I enjoyed reading it.
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)