Dusk's got a pretty fat cock, and four amazon-sized, curvy villainesses are about to get the dicking of their lifetime. They're not actually that evil, just starved for some good sex, really.
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The story is mostly complete, which is why I marked it complete, even though it now feels like a proper epilogue is kinda missing to clean things up. It definitely deserves one, but I'm quite busy at the moment, so I can't make any promises at all for the next few days.
Good chance the epilogue will turn out decently long-ish too, depending on my mood at the time of writing, but it will mostly be a fluffy look into the near-ish future, and Dusk's new life, which now might just involve some pregnant, and horny villains and princesses. The fun stuff.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed reading this! Hope to publish more stories someday.
All part of the plan.
I look forward to the epilogue
Luna: So you're telling me, that you orchestrated the largest Villain attack in history just shy of included Discord and Tirek, plunged Equestria into a short-lived but deadly chaos, all so that you could get, not only yourself but me and Umbra pregnant with Dusk Shine's foals?
Celestia: Indeed.
Luna: Why the fuck would you do that, when you could've just ordered him to do so?!
Celestia: It was more fun this way.
Ok im confused, who was in control? Did daybreaker win and I ended up jackin it to the beginnings of a grimdark sex world? Or did Dusk defeat Daybreaker and brought back Celestia like he did with NMM/Luna?
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Read the last line again.
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Im just confused to whether or not Celestia was in control while having sex with Dusk. After reading the last paragraph it sounds to me that by impregnating Celestia/ Daybreaker, it broke the control Daybreaker had and allowed Celestia to return. However, an earlier part in this chapter kinda makes me wonder if Celestia was control the whole time or not.
Loved it
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So question are you adding more chapters to this story or just doing another story to be sequel to this
Inb4 it was roleplay
Humanity, one day, we will, inevitably reach the stars. And one day, we will, inevitably reach other, inteligent, sentient, yet utterly alien races. We will shake their many appendages, engage in trade, exchange ideas, and even... Attempt diplomacy.
I should probably buy ES2 one of these days
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I plan to add a final Epilogue chapter at some point. I already have the outline mostly set in stone, and will get to writing that at some point. This might take a few weeks depending on how much stuff is going on in my life. Technically the story isn't quite finished yet in that regard, no.
Good Celestia or Evil Daybreaker, that's the question...
Or maybe even both...
Does that make her less or more dangerous than the others?
Is she always like this, is she currently nursing a secret foal of hers or just a quick spell to spice up the situation?
Dusk: *intimidated* "...How many times will we do this?"
Daybreaker: *matter-of-fact* "Yes."
This would have made for an interesting ending. But it seems the story isn't over yet.
Great ending! Excellent femdom.
I understand that there will be no epilogue (in which Dusk will raise three [?] of his children).
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Yes.
Always like this. It's part of her being a quasi-goddess of fertility and motherhood, if you will. She takes some pride in it, too. Celestia naturally hides this kind of thing, Daybreaker is much more open about it.
Yes indeed. The epilogue will be added soon(TM). (Read: In a few weeks or so, since real life is making writing difficult for all sorts of reasons right now.)
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There will be an epilogue, real life just makes it really difficult to write right now. It probably won't jump far enough into the future to show Dusk raising his children though.
Was looking forward to this chapter. Mommy domme just kinda has that effect on me. And it fits Celestia/Daybreaker so well; kind and gentle, yet firm and in control.
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Rumor says an upstart called Cadance once challenged her for this title.
CelestiaDaybreaker wasn't having any of it and easily knocked her down a notch.Now Cadance is limiting herself strictly to romantic love, and even that is mostly contained to the Chrystal Empire. And whenever she considers expanding a single glance from the Solar Queen is (usually) enough to remind her of her place.
I wasn't talking about the story but about this specific paragraph.
But I still look forward to see where this epilogue will go.
Great, but don't stress yourself.
Quality takes time, and Real Live is always more important.
Great job. Can’t wait for the epilogue
Well I think we can all agree that daybreaker/Celestia just just sucked out his soul
Can't wait for the epilogue!!
Hope life's been going okay
Where is the epilogue?
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Might be posted soon. Or maybe not. Real life has been busy and I wasn't online on this site at all for a few months. I'll have to look into wrapping up the scribbles I already wrote, but I can't yet promise I'll get back into the swing of doing some writing here and there.
Here's hoping!
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Yes!! Cannot wait to see what happens with this, and I hope for other stories!!
.like more twilight breeding.
Do you take commissions??