Keep in mind I wrote this at 10PM until 11:30PM, fell asleep, woke up at 5AM extremely tired and have now finished at 6:30AM. My first attempt at a sappy romance which is based loosely on a section in my life, one I'm still in sadly but nonetheless a section. Please enjoy as the intricacies of my mind destroy you. Not really alot of it probably make sense like Team Ponies.
Rating will be kept as Everyone because I believe it relevant, due to literally a couple of words that hint at the start of something sexual, but doesn't happen and no gore as well.
Chapters (1)
This is pretty much the rating I was expecting for my other story.
Constructive criticism is appreciated, otherwise a: "Citpo you like dick stop writing stories fucken... I pull better stories out of my asshole."
Have a nice day
nicee
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Haha I'm glad you enjoyed it man. Let me know if there's anything I can improve/branch off from this.
1306808 eh maybe some back story or maybe sequel where he didn't kill himself but just ran away? eh either way man this is good
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Who says he killed himself hmm?
Just because it's a suicide note doesn't exactly mean he's dead.
1306851 eh just kinda got the meaning since he wrote a suicide note he killed himself
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I intended suicide but as soon as it finished publishing I did some brain storming and thinking about a follow up.
Note: I'm not... suicidal about anything...
1306882 eh a follow up would be nice and I didn't expect you to be suicidal
Awesome, didn't wanna give that impression.
I'll see what I can do about a follow story.