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couple of things i'm gonna expect in some of these chapters. first is Discord changing gender for some chaos and to try the "stud Star". second os for chrysalis to make a return nd try to join the herd since she seemed smitten after the whole event but we never really saw her again. third would have been some sort of punishment for Cadance for basically introducing the necklace to him in the first place but at this point it's been so long in the story i dont think it is gonna happen. last thing would be to have him pair with the sphinx.
none of these could happen and it would be fine, but these are just some things i would like to read about.
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Would keep it mind and don't worry for Cadence i have something for her
Except the Discord thing…maybe a female version of him, but this one is kind of a Ken, if he goes female it will be a barbie, there will be nothing there to work with. Still thanks for remind me jeje
So Mark will get his chance with Daisy eh? That is gonna be an interesting chapter for sure...
So, glad to see another story working it's way from the starter of the last one. Please keep them coming and "cumming"!
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Oh believe me we will.
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Yes we will
This chapter was fun to edit and see as it came about word by word. Hope you all enjoy it as much as I did!
Omg chrysalis reaction had me howling it was soo funny keep up the great work!!!
Makes me think there's more to theses lines hmmm, I think she is noble or a princess. from her home lands. That and Daisy doesn't sound like it fits there warrior names.
Not bad I'm hoping to see Sky join
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Maybe as a special friend, she doesn't do well in a herd
I can't wait for Daisy he joined the herd and who knows maybe sky joins down the road
Awesome chapter I can't wait for daisy to introduce me to her parents and I can't believe Chrysalis was left speechless great ending to the Chapel By the way to
Methinks some plans for the "fun" variety is in the works as we speak...
I think that Twilight going to want to be with Mark and who knows maybe Daisy joins in in the next chapter or so I love this story can't wait to see what you do next
“I think she likes you~” Surprise teases him, poking his cheek
Things are getting interesting as of now...
Yes they are very interesting and I wonder who's going to have kittens first Twilight and Her Herd or Mark and his herd
I love it i was iffy in a few places throughout the first part but i stayed reading and im not complaining i cant wait to read moorree
My Manic Twilight senses are Tingling!!!
Something's going on I can't wait to find out what it is cuz it's so exciting
(I will attempt to avoid spoilers thus my vague statements for a good bit)
It seems something is starting. Something is brewing. The calm before the unnecessary storm.
I would also like to say that this is very well done. I am also wondering of the purpose on why other twilight build him with these purposes and if mark is truly what other twilight thinks or knows he is. Finally the talk between AIs with life is a bit confusing so i won't take a side or rant but aren't all humans AIs in a sort of way. (CGP grey video in regards to how machine thinks made me consider that)
What are the fetishes?
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They mostly appear in the previous story but don't worry they will come pretty soon
Awesome chapter I like what you did here I can't wait to see what you do next
I been reading this story while i enjoyed it.
the bit about mark being a escape experiment by this AU Twilight... I almost dropped the story.
Because I'm assuming this going to turn into another one of your it was all a story told by Mark, so level with me, is it is it?!
I like to know really.
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Nope this one IS really part of the story, an idea I got that explains Mark past a little more. And why he had his gifts.
A nice little spin on the trope of "Anonimous without any memory"
Don't worry this isn't a Alternative Universe, like I say you only need to ready the tittle to know if it is or not.
Plus I reserved those for October, don't worry
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=squ0qu55JHM
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Yeah I got the idea from a youtuber, small little stories to tell on the campfire, that is what all of those things were all about. Well that combine with Marvel´s "What if"
Great chapter can't wait for the next one and like how fluttershy told them how it is
Wow
Well Twily's herd will be a power couple but Cadence is in deep doo doo with him knowing the truth! So will he interesting to see what will be next in the next chapter.
Who is in marks herd atm? I know fluttershy, the thestral Umbral and the earthpony milky. Anyone else?
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Surprise the Pegasus that looks just like Pinkie. For now there is a total of four mares in his herd
Great work I love this chapter but I wonder what the ruling Twilight's going to do to mark
I’m so glad that Chrysalis Is falling in love it’s really cute
Alright another interesting story that I binged upon viewing, keep up the good work
Seemed fine here for theis chapter, I won't be a Grammer Nazi to ya. Just WE da fans want MOAR Chapters!
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jeje I will see what I can do
It was worth the wait and I like how you had a j and Rainbow Dash help convince Mac they should be in his herd
Why do I see Twilight getting frustrated with the nobility, going mad with power and ruling as an absolute monarchy?
Experiment 5t-S? Why does my gut have a sinking feeling about this?
So just how dark is this Twilight?
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You tell me, just know this Twilight didn't exactly let go of not overthink anything or be so attach to following a check list. She only learn how to hide it better.
Ooh, i can't wait for the update. Honestly its been quite a story, though honestly the fact that a version of twilight is atill like this make me wonder for the elements of harmony in there world.
So that twilight is a tyrant no surprise there it's was an inevitable outcome actually considering her mental problems and I expected this to be a possible shift
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100% OCD. Bad cases of Manic. Worries she'll be sent back to Magic Kindergarten. Doesn't have a herd or much of a sex life, yet wants to deprive this dimension's Mark. If the spell is removed she may be the first Alicorn to be murdered for herd wrecking.
Wow can't wait for what happens next
Discord: no time to explain, you gotta fuc-.... you're already riding him, how did you know?
Crysalis: the hell are you on about? i just wanted that glorious dick again!
NegaTwily is still in my opinion up $hit's creek without a paddle for what she did.
Though in my mind Discord should have also played Megalovania while he moved the armor around to mess with her further...