The first human to travel to Equestria. In this elog (Equestria Log), we get to read the human and Twilight describe the encounter (but with different points of view).
This is more of a introduction for how a human ends up in Equestria. So slice-of-random and not an adventure or drama.
Getting some cover art is on my todo list. (If you can draw a stick figure, I can use that!)
Hollywood style synopsis: In this amazing tantalizing drama we experience a riveting thrilling tale describing two very different destinies, converging into one, as they are forced to overcome their differences and come together on their way to a mutual future.
'to' is supposed to be there between evolve and warn
Great story!
You made Twilight too dumb and unlikeable.
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Can you elaborate on what kind of "background" and "intentions" someone told you I apparently have? I think I comment too little to get myself a hater yet, so I'm genuinely curious. I assure you, my only intention was to express my opinion on your story. No ill will towards you.
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It's difficult for a writer's character to be smarter than the writer, but if you tell me the most stupid sentence/paragraph/moment or point out a smart thing she could have done, I can make it slightly better.
EDIT: Nevermind. A "viking" revealed your background and intentions in a message.
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Thanks a lot! Always good to get some errors fixed, and now it's fixed.