• Published 16th Nov 2021
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Descent Into Madness Without the Ones You Love - UnamusedWaffle



A showdown. Friends torn apart. Without a support line, how far will he fall?

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Descent Into Madness (Alt. Ending)

Author's Note:

The better ending, in my opinion. If you want to skip down, be my guest, the new ending starts off in place of where the last chapter ended with Blister blacking out

“Ahahaha! What can you do now that I’ve captured all of your friends?”

I can only stare on in horror as I watch Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Cadance, Shining Armor, and every other pony I’ve come to know over the past several months be ripped away from me in blank tendrils as lines of purple electricity pulsed up and down them.

And they could only stare back at me.

I grit my teeth. Stay calm, remember what they taught you. Stay calm. Stay calm. Stay ca-I CAN’T!

“GRRRRRAAAHHH DAMMIT SOMBRA!!” I roar before clutching my chest and falling to the ground. I feel a searing pain in my chest and I start to sweat and breathe heavily. I can barely make out voices over the ringing in my ears.

“Blister! Blister!” I can barely make out who it is. That’s Luna? No, Twilight? Shit, I can’t tell.

“You have to calm down! Remember the breathing trick we taught you!” I’m sorry! I’m trying but I just ca-

“AAAAAAAH” I cry out as the searing pain spreads out from my chest to encompass my entire body. I start to breathe even more heavily. My only focus is on not passing out right now. I won’t pass out now.

I can’t. There’s too much at stake here.

My vision starts to blur. I can’t even move any of my body parts now. I’m too weak.

No, not NOW! PLEASE NOT NOW! I’m begging you! Whatever deity can hear me, PLEASE!

My breathing starts to slow and my vision goes black.

I’m too weak.


“Oh no,” Celestia whispered. Luna was silent. Twilight was hyperventilating.

Sombra chuckled lightly.

“Look at the mess your savior has been reduced to. Any second now our duel disks should automatically shut themselves off and then the Crystal Empire shall be MINE ONCE AGAIN!”

Sombra smirked and looked back at the ponies in his grasp. He motioned with his right hoof and the tendril holding Luna moved closer until she was inches away from his face. When Sombra spoke, she immediately recoiled in disgust.

“Hmm, you shall all make fine prizes. After I throw that wretched guard captain to the torture chambers, I shall make you all mine.”

Luna’s eyes widened before she growled and spit in Sombra’s face. Sombra growled in response and slapped her.

“Why you little ungrateful-I should have you beheaded for this you insolent-”

“You will be doing NOTHING! GET YOUR HOOVES OFF OF HER!” A raspy and almost demonic voice draws everypony’s attention towards it just in time to see Blister rocket towards Sombra and deliver a left hook to his face.

Shaking herself from her momentary shock, Luna tried to reach her hoof out.

“Blister, I’m right here! Come h-”

Luna is cut off as the tendrils rip her and everypony else behind Sombra once again. Now that they could get a good look at Blister again, Cadance gasped.

There, hovering not 20 feet away from them via his wings, was Blister, but not a familiar one. His once turquoise eyes were now reduced to a crimson red with one singular focus. Sombra.

“What in the hay is up with his eyes?” Applejack asked.

“Anypony else feel that radiating off of him?” Twilight asked. Celestia spoke up first.

“I think this is what he was trying to hold back, what we were helping to hold back this entire time.”

“But we can’t be there for him right now!” Cadance growled as she and her husband thrashed in vain to escape the tendrils.

“What do we do, Princess?” Twilight asked. There was a certain desperation in her voice that gave Celestia pause. What could they do?

They couldn’t stop Sombra in his current state now that he had absorbed the Crystal Heart, it would take lots of magical power and time they didn’t have to pry it out of him, the rest of the Crystal Ponies were all imprisoned in their homes making it impossible to power the Crystal Heart, and now it was all down to their otherworldly friend who just wanted to go home.

Why did this have to happen? Celestia thought as she thought over the situation. The more and more she thought about it, the more chilling a realization she came to. Despite everything they had done and everything they did, it was hopeless.

Completely and utterly hopeless.

“I-” Celestia started, but cut herself off. She let out a shaky breath and tried again. “I am sorry, dear Twilight, but I do not know. I don’t know if there is anything we can do.”

She never wanted to let her student down like this. She never wanted to watch the expressions of her subjects, sister, niece, and dear student morph into various states of shock and horror because of her.

But she had to.

She didn’t have a choice.

Just as Rainbow Dash opened her mouth to protest, she was cut off.

“You invade this kingdom, uninvited. You kill innocent ponies, you hurt my friends! You threaten RAPE! I WILL MAKE YOU SUFFER IN THE FIERY PITS OF HELL!” Blister shouted, much to the horror of everypony in front of him. All except for one.

“You-” Sombra started.

“ENOUGH! I WILL HAVE NO MORE OF THIS! IT’S MY TURN FUCKER, I DRAW!” Blister shouted as he dramatically raised his duel disk over his head and drew his card, his hoof arcing across the sky.

“I play Amazing Pendulum! When I have no cards in my pendulum zones, I can get two pendulum cards from my extra deck! Xiangke Magician and Xiangsheng Magician are back to set the pendulum scale and make you SUFFER MY WRATH!”

After Blister swiped his hoof across his duel disk, two beacons of blue light shot out from the ground up into the sky from either side of him. In the same moment, two humanoid figures appeared in the pillars and proceeded to float up into position above Blister. A stylized “3” appeared below the one on the left and a stylized “8” appeared below the one on the right.

“No, Blister! Please listen to me!” Luna shouted from behind Sombra. “This isn’t you! Snap out of it!” But it fell on deaf ears.

“I can once again summon monsters SIMULTANEOUSLY! I PENDULUM SUMMON!” Blister shouted as a hole in the sky ripped open in between Xiangke and Xiangsheng Magician. Through it came a single crimson light that took shape into a hulking dragon. The light gave way to a crimson red dragon with four white spikes coming out of its head and back as well as a huge blue orb in the center of its chest.

“RETURN TO THE FRONT LINES TO FIGHT! ODD-EYES PENDULUM DRAGON!”

Sombra growled.

“That is just one measly dragon, how-”

“SHUT UP YOU COWARD! I’ve had to listen to your FUCKING ARROGANT BABBLING ALL DAY NOW IS THE TIME TO SILENCE IT FOR GOOD! I WILL CRUSH YOU!

I play the spell card, Monster Reborn!”

As Blister’s hoof swiped across his duel disk again, three chains rocketed out from his duel disk and into the ground below, causing the crystal to crack and shatter as the chains worked their way down. When they started to pull up, Sombra could only look on in horror at the dark behemoth of a monster he had destroyed earlier in the duel.

“Cloaked in shadows and relentless in its objective,” Blister chanted. “I once again call upon the most dangerous of dragons! Resurrect, Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon!”

The dragon’s slender and sleek purple neck contrasted horribly with the spiky and black wings protruding from its sides in a newly terrifying way that nopony had ever experienced before.

Sombra took a step back.

“And now for my FINAL TRICK! I activate Xiangke Magician’s pendulum effect! It turns Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon’s rank into a level!” Blister shouted once again. It was a miracle his voice wasn’t shrill at this point.

Sombra’s eyes went wide.

“What?! Impossible!” He growled.

Blister just ignored him.

“And finally, I activate Xiangsheng Magician’s pendulum effect! It raises Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon’s level to match Odd-Eyes Pendulum Dragon’s level! The stage has been set for your downfall!”

“I can’t believe it.” Rainbow Dash muttered.

“He has two level seven monsters on his field.” Twilight finished.

“Oh, no,” Celestia muttered. “What have I done?

“I overlay Dark Rebellion XYZ Dragon and Odd-Eyes Pendulum Dragon. With these two dragons, I build the overlay network!” Blister shouted as the two dragons on his field devolved once again into streams of light that flew into the spiraling black hole beneath him. After the black hole exploded in a flash of light, he began to chant again.

“Dragon with dichromatic eyes, resurrect from the deep darkness and burn everything in the world with your flames of anger! I XYZ SUMMON! RANK 7! THE BLAZING DRAGON CALLED FORTH BY CALAMITY, ODD-EYES RAGING DRAGON! PREPARE TO FEEL MY WRATH”

Sombra, Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Twilight, Shining Armor, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie all watched in horror as something that could only be described as truly demonic emerged from the flash of light.

Fluttershy just had her eyes shut.

The dragon, if it could be called that, was an abomination. Odd-Eyes’ usual crimson skin had somehow turned an even deeper red with four demonic-like horns protruding from the beast’s head. Dark Rebellion's wings looked like they had been torn open and were now shooting fire into the surrounding air.

“This beast will send you back to the fiery pits of hell where you belong!” Blister shouted. “I activate Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon’s effect! By using one overlay unit, it destroys all cards on your field and Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon gains 200 attack points for each one!”

One of the purple orbs of light circling Odd-Eyes flew into its mouth and the fire from its wings seemed to get even hotter.

“I activate my trap card, the Phantom Knights Fog Blade!” Sombra said as best he could with his eyes still fixated on the demon in front of him. “I can equip this trap to your monster to stop it from attacking or using its effects!”

“You will stop NOTHING! I activate my counter trap, Solemn Judgement! By paying half my life points,” Blister screamed in pain as a pillar of darkness erupted out from underneath him. “I can negate your trap card and DESTROY IT!”

“What?!” Sombra cried out as a bolt of lightning erupted down from the clouds above and destroyed his trap card.

“Nothing can stop my FLAMES OF ANGER! GO ODD-EYES! BURN EVERYTHING DOWN!” Blister thrust his hoof out in front of him as spikes of flame erupted from Odd-Eyes’ wings to pierce the surrounding area. After Odd-Eyes maneuvered itself in a 360° spin, streaks of melted crystal were all that was left of the dozens of crystal homes that once surrounded them.

Celestia couldn’t help a little spark of happiness at seeing Sombra’s field clear of his Phantom Knights of Break Sword and several trap cards.

Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon: 3000 ATK -> 4000 ATK

“Battle.”

Sombra recovered and his expression morphed into a vengeful frown.

“You fool! I have 5200 life points left! Even if you attack me, I will still be able to end you on my next-”

“There won’t be a next turn!” Blister interrupted and Sombra growled.

“Odd-Eyes Raging Dragon can attack twice per turn! This is it, SOMBRA! PREPARE TO SUFFER MY WRATH! GO ODD-EYES RAGING DRAGON!”

The demon reared its head back as a ring of blue fire appeared in front of its face.

“DESTRUCTION BURST OF RAGE!”

The demon swung its head forward again only to release an absolutely massive beam of blue fire and the air around them all started to grow more and more as the beam approached them. Celestia wondered for a moment if they would be baked alive along with Sombra.

And Celestia wondered if Sombra could somehow read her thoughts as she and the rest of her friends suddenly found themselves face to face with the oncoming fury.

“If I’m going down, I’m bringing you all down with me!” Sombra shouted and cackled madly. “Even if I lose I win!”

“Oh no you don’t, you FUCKING BASTARD!” Then, to the complete and utter shock everypony else, they watched a Blister swiftly reached his hoof out and swung it hard to the right. As he did so, the entire group was enveloped in a dark aura that chilled everypony to their bones. But they had no time to ponder that as they were violently thrown to the side into one of the long since cooled melted buildings.

Blister simply watched as Sombra’s entire body was enveloped in the blue fire and was slowly yet surely melted down until there was nothing left. No bone, no crown, no sign of the former mad King save for a single pile of ash.

Once Odd-Eyes had disappeared, Blister walked over to the pile of ash and stared down at it.

He blinked.


My vision starts to fade back in. Where am I? Breathing heavily, I whip my head around. Crystal streets, crystal houses. At least, I think they were crystal houses. What happened here?

Wait, Sombra!

But I am unable to ponder that anymore as I am ripped from my thoughts by the sound of groaning and a gasp from my right. I whip my head towards the noise and my eyes go wide at what I see.

There is Luna, Celestia, Twilight, Cadance, everypony, scattered across one of the melted houses. All looking to be in terrible pain. But the most sobering thing of all is the black and singed spots of fur that littered Celestia, Luna, Twilight, and Cadance’s coats. I stare back at them in shock.

And they all stare back at me in...fear? Why fear? I look down at my hooves and I start to sweat. Wait, what was it that I just summoned? What did I do?

I start to breathe heavily. It all comes flooding back to me.

I look back over at my group of friends. What do they all think of me? Will they ever forgive me? How would I even earn that? I’ve gone too far, I don’t have any friends anymore, do I?

I feel tears welling up in my eyes.

Luna takes a step closer.

“Stay back!” I shout, my voice breaking halfway through. Now that I’ve used it, my throat feels like a desert.

I cough three times.

Luna takes three steps closer.

“I’m dangerous…” I whisper.

“Blister, please. Get over here,” Luna calls out to me, but I’m too distracted. I whip my head to the right. Too many Crystal Ponies emerging from their homes.

To my left…maybe I can make it to the train station before-

I feel a comforting aura wrap itself around me and pull me towards my friends. I scrape my hooves across the group in a desperate attempt to pull away.

“No, stop!” I call out desperately, tears streaming down my face now. Why won’t they listen?

“I don’t want to hurt you!” But my protests fall on deaf ears as I am pulled face to face with the ponies I so desperately don’t want to see right now.

I’m on my haunches now, just staring at Luna.

With a defeated smile she says, “It’s alright, Blister. Come here.”

What? Why? Why would they accept me? How could they? I’m dangerous, I’m-

I am pulled even closer as Luna wraps her hooves around my torso.

“It’s okay,” She whispers. I feel the tears stream down my face even more.

Embarrassingly, I bury my face in her neck and simply cry as I slowly start to feel myself drift off.

It’s been a long day.

I’m tired.

Comments ( 38 )

I sure remember that Odd Eyes Raging Dragon scene in the anime big time.

Where was Spike anyway?
In fact how is he handled in this AU?

Did I say something wrong..?

All I asked was about Spike and suddenly I got two downvotes already.

11051874
Not sure. I personally don’t consider this an AU, but to each their own. And would you believe me if I said I forgot about Spike? :facehoof:

11051893
Oh..
He was forgotten?

Is he able to duel too?

11051903
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ who knows? Maybe future me while writing another story

11051925
Ok.

Was Spike pretty much forgotten when you wrote all 6 stories?

11051928
It wouldn't have made sense for spike to be involved in my other stories, this one is the exception

11051989
I feel like it made sense for him to be in the Tirek one since Spike was there in the season 4 finale(same with the Discord one)
I don't know.. it bugs me he is just absent so much.


Bummed that his only appearance is just being captured by Sombra and one of his few achievements gets completely negated..
Sorry.. it just brings up a wound on what the season 9 premiere did to Spike, specifically the Sombra thing.

11052025
Yeah he was there in the show, but my story involving Tirek didn’t focus on the actual fight or the events leading up to it, it was purely about the aftermath

I haven’t watched the season 9 finale yet so no comment on that

11052083
Still Spike could have been there anyway..
I don't know.. sorry..

In the season 9 premiere Sombra came back but the writers had him ignore the fact Spike was the one who foiled him.
Like no acknowledgement at all. And the fact when Sombra brainwashed everyone in Ponyville, including Spike while the Mane 6 take him down. So instead of Spike having a hand in stopping Sombra like he did last time, he gets wasted hard.
It solidified that no matter what Spike does, he is always in the shadows of the girls in the end since he's not one of the "chosen ones".
But it also negated one of his few achievements, it hurts worse due to Spike stopping Sombra was significant due to Sombra is one of the few villains that the Mane 6 aren't responsible for foiling. So Sombra coming back with Spike taken out and the girls stopping Sombra this time took away one of Spike's greatest achievements. Sombra was Spike's villain but they had the Mane 6 take that away..

Yeah.. sorry for ranting there..

11052176
I won’t be reading most of that because of spoilers, but there’s no need to be sorry, you seem like you needed to get that off your chest

Also consider putting a spoiler tag on that whole section

11052203
Sorry..
I've managed to put a spoiler tag there(though the season 9 premiere was out for almost 3 years, how long till you see the premiere?)

11052214
Not sure, don’t have plans to do such but I’m not avoiding it either, just haven’t gotten around to it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Again, no need to apologize, bro, you’re all good.

You’re like Twilight continuously apologizing to Celestia for apologizing

^^^I mean that as a joke

11052224
Its a habit I think(especially due to nervousness, not sure on that honestly.)

Yeah.. in this with Sombra is back but Spike is instantly taken out and at Sombra's mercy while someone else takes him down(Spike's achievement getting negated, especially since Sombra was Spike's villain there in the show) really.. brings back the wound that the season 9 premiere did..
I really suggest you look at the season 9 premiere as soon as possible to see what I mean.
In fact what other premieres you didn't see since you didn't see season 9?

11052258
I have explicit memory of everything up until the end of season 4, and after that everything gets fragmented but I know I have watched most episodes up until the end of season 7 if my Netflix watch history is anything to go by

11052281
So pretty much you didn't see the premieres/finales of season 8 and 9 then?

11052286
Yeah. I have seen the Last Problem though, weird huh?

11052287
So you basically know what happened to the Royal Sisters there?

11053103
In the season 9 finale? They all sacrificed themselves to let Twilight get away or something, right?

11053106
Kind of.
They only got captured

What cards Spike might use?

11053525
¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I’d imagine it’d be dragon related but there’s dozens of dragon archetypes to pick from: Dragunity, Guardragons, Blue-Eyes, Galaxy-Eyes, the Dimensional Dragons, lots of others I’m forgetting

11053608
I can see he uses alot of dragons. To reflect his potential.
Like Red Eyes , the Dimension Dragons, Guardragons, Chaos dragons(even Red Eyes/Blue Eye/Galaxy Eyes together), etc.

Though bummed he isn't allowed to use the Dimension Dragons here since Blister is using them..

11054216
🤔Genuine question, ever considered just writing a story like that yourself? I'm sure you'd be able to pull something that you like better than anyone else. Hell, the whole reason I'm writing on this site is because I ran out of/couldn't find any fics that fit my very specific tastes, and that resulted in everything I've ever released

11054246
Not really a story writer but more of a idea giver/reader something.
I don't know..

Anything about Spike regarding your stuff?

11054828
I thought the same thing until I started to try and put the idea burning in my head onto paper, or my computer I guess.

I don’t have any Spike plans for right now but who knows if that’ll change? Future me, that’s who and I ain’t that guy, sorry bro

11055146
I see.


Ok then..
Though it just bugs me alot on how Spike in this one is just captured and at Sombra's mercy(which completely negates Spike's achievement of stopping him like what the season 9 premiere did to Spike) or the fact he can't use the Dimension Dragons due to Blister having them here.

11055384
I’ll be on the look out of you do release spike content

11055420
I am not sure if I do write anything or not. Maybe in the future, but I am not sure.


So um.. anyway..
Any thoughts on what I mentioned about Spike?

11055384
I mean my only thought is “I didn’t even mention him so why are you annoyed” but that’s unhelpful and annoying in and of itself.

Other than that I don’t know what to tell you. I don’t want you to be upset but at the same time I just don’t feel an urge, that spark, to write something about Spike that I felt before writing this or any of my other stories…

11055589
I hope I wasn't bothersome when I brought up those two bits, was I.?

11055618
Absolutely not, you’re good bro

11055635
Thats good.

Yeah.. you might want to look at the season 9 premiere when you get the chance to see what I mean about the thing with Spike there regarding Sombra..

11055649
🅱🆁🆄🅷 someone’s gotta hit on us or some thin’ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

11055773
You mean how someone keeps downvoting our comments?

That has been baffling me for awhile.

11055776
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Anyway, yeah I’ll have to give it a watch when I get the time, maybe over Winter break

Wait, who is Blister?

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