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Abyssal

"This is a message to anypony out there. There are five of us. We are stranded in a frozen canyon in the Crystal Mountains. Our food supply is low, we do not have much warmth, or shelter. There is very little chance of survival in this harsh abyss. My name is Lyra Heartstrings, if there is anypony out there, anywhere, please...help us."

(Thanks go to MaxVive and -Dragonwing- for editing.)

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cloudranger

cloudranger #1 · Sep 15th, 2012 · · ·

This looks pretty cool so far. Although, when I first read it I immediately thought of that cannibalism incident involving that sports team stuck on a mountain, any inspiration from there? Just a thought.

MLPsweener

MLPsweener #2 · Sep 19th, 2012 · · ·

hmmm might read

Harwick

Harwick #3 · Sep 20th, 2012 · · ·

I'm in, provided the story tags are honest and this is an "adventure" and not "tragic" "sad" or "dark". It's a good set-up, and I'm curious to see where it leads.