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Briarberrybones


i'm here to write fluttercord fluff on the downlow

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Both Fluttershy and Discord have developed particularly warm feelings for one another, feelings that have blossomed into something far more than just a friendship. However, they're both a little lost and a little frightened about what to do with these realizations and begin to seek out guidance from their friends. Can either of them step out of their comfort zones to begin a new adventure together? (extra fluff warning)

Cover art is my own

Some good fluff tunes:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jK6JQSPFzPM&ab_channel=SleepingAtLast-Topic

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 37 )

:ajsmug: and now the fun begins
:rainbowderp: Poor Discord
:raritystarry: I feel like such an old mare
:flutterrage: Spike Rarity? Kiss!
:twilightoops: ???!!!
:pinkiegasp: We all can have foals together and have matching diapers and high chairs and play dates and Annarchy will rule the kingdom
But only during their play dates or Guys Night Out but only If Spike & Discord agree...
:facehoof: Pinkie that's rather specific ...
:moustache: Me like

:trollestia: Well well well chaos is forever controlled in my kingdom

:twilightoops: You're retired - Here we have Annarchy running amuck
:duck: Our hybrids are 0n a play date
:moustache: You'll get everything back at nap time
:flutterrage: Annarchy Flutter Discord . Wait until daddy gets home!

I have definitely enjoyed this story, the characters exploration and interactions has been wonderful. And this chapter was extremely cute regarding Discord and Fluttershy's dynamic, how they have different demeanor when being with their friends and when they are alone together.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Thank you so much for the compliments! The next chapter will be up hopefully within the next week. It just deserves special love and attention 💕

:moustache: We finally found Discord, In the Everfree forest
:rainbowderp: He was a dried out husk of himself
:ajbemused: He didn't have a chance poor fella
:duck: He had a smile like my Spikey had when we first dated
:pinkiehappy: Like my last party!
:twilightoops: Who did this? Fluttershy who's responsible ?
:yay: I only wanted cute little baby bunnies
:trollestia: Okay I've heard enough
:facehoof: It doesn't work that way....
:moustache::raritywink: Ask Angel Bunny he saw the whole thing

Amazing! I enjoyed the reading a lot!

What a nice closure for this story, full of fluff and emotions. I was giggling during the tender moments and the little awkward yet on character reaction of Fluttershy after having Discord's physical attention.

Thank you for writing this story

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Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad it's been enjoyed! 💕💕💕

:pinkiegasp: twitch wiggle shaky shake twitchy woggle!
:twilightoops: Are we doomed?
:pinkiehappy: play date with the hybrids
:facehoof:
:moustache::raritywink: :flutterrage: Annarchy stop shaking the moon!

:trollestia: This was truly magical
Thank you

Why would he feel the same for me? What could I ever offer him that would even tempt the idea?
Acceptance! You make a major mistake. others yell "Monster" she looks at you and says "You made a mistake." fur mismatched parts she sees YOU not a monster just you.

One of the best "Fluttercord" stories I have read, well done I say well done.

This story is supercute and I liked it, but you really don’t need the sex tag. A little bit of making out and innuendo doesn’t really warrant it, and it might give people the wrong idea. I mean, I just wrote a Fluttercord story with a scene that clearly indicates they are going for it but the scene cut off before anything explicit happened, and I don’t think the story needed the sex tag. That is more of a warning tag for scenes where characters are very clearly doing it.

Still, a good story.

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Thank you! This is my first story on the site and I was a bit worried about that. I didn't quite know if it was needed or not. Thank you for the advice!

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No prob! And keep writing, I'm sure you have more stories to share! :pinkiehappy:

Why do I have a hunch Discord is disguising himself as all of her friends to prove a point? :rainbowdetermined2:

"A chase?" Fluttershy pondered the notion; a mental lightbulb beamed to life in her head. She knew just what she'd do.

I get the sneaking suspicion that Fluttershy might have misunderstood Rarity just a touch.

Oh, this is lovely and hits in all the right places. You echo so much of how I see why Fluttershy would be the one to fall for Discord. I'm hoping this beautiful prose of yours will fuel me to write my own pieces again! I'm definitely going to keep reading!

Thank you for keeping the friendship theme alive in a romance fiction! It's too important, especially in a show specifically about friendship.

And so this chapter was a joy to read and it's always fun to see how everyone interprets Applejack. Sometimes they make her really wise and comforting, and she's able to stay calm while still being honest. Sometimes she says things truthfully but it comes out passionately when it comes to how she feels about her friends, so much that it's almost forceful.

You've got a bit a balance of both. I like it.

And this just took the cake.

“Sweet Celestia, their kids are gunna be a riot,” she mused to herself before returning to her work in the main barn.

:rainbowlaugh:

Your Rarity was spot-on in all the right ways.

Now, I would like to set up an appointment with you so you can teach me how to flirt and find a husband. College didn't work. :rainbowlaugh:

YOU THREW DISCORD IN AS A SURPRISE!

And yes, Spike, go Spike, Spike is definitely the VIP!

Your characterization so far is undeniably spot-on.

I was so scared this would only be from Fluttershy's perspective. Thank you, thank you, thank you for letting us inside the castle!

Big Mac was a surprise. I've seen many a fic where Big Mac did startle everyone by speaking up (and in canon episodes too!) but I really expected Spike to keep carrying on the conversation. It was great! And a nice connection to how AJ handled it with Fluttershy.

Awkward Discord awkwardly calling Spike and Big Mac "my boys" was something I didn't know I needed until now.

The ending was perfect. Discord just being dreamy and simply stating she asked him out, and not the other way around, only for the boys to be totally caught off-guard...

Nice little 180 you threw in there.

And what a nice little nudge with the spring flowers going with her eyes to reference an earlier chapter. You got all the tricks up your sleeve!

Hot dang. This screamed Disney to me. This is one of the best FlirtyShy's I've read in a long time while still being believable.

Hot dang.

Thank you for this. As I melt into a puddle of goo on this morning that started perfectly with this story, I feel motivation to try writing some for fluttercord week soon.

Keep writing. You'll do a great job.

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Thank you so much for all the lovely comments!!! It all means a lot coming from you! I'm not sure I'll be able to participate in fluttercord week, but I do have an idea or two for a Hearths Warming themed story... It seems appropriate for the current season. :yay:💕

Aaaaaa this story is so fluffy and wonderful! I do think the characterization is very, well, canon, maybe except for this last chapter? It’s probably cause it’s so romantic that I’m always at a lost for words when reading this.
Again this is such a lovely story and aaaaa!! Hopefully youll make more!

I just love the way you've portrayed Applejack and how she might respond to such a situation. As Tater mentioned, the role of friendships in a romance story is important, and sometimes, I think, overlooked. It's wonderful to see Fluttershy willing to talk through her feelings with a friend, and the way Applejack passionately shut down her insecurities was everything I wanted out of a conversation between these two.

and if he messed this up, Applejack may just try turning him back to stone all by herself, or at least make him wish he was

Thank you for this absolutely brilliant line!

This story is the Platonic ideal of fluff. The characterization is excellent, the advice and insights are all realistic and unforced, the pacing is perfect, the characters' plans went off without a hitch, and they got what they wanted in the end. Even though we all knew exactly where this story was going, you incorporated plenty of appropriate humor, exquisite details, and minor twists to make the inevitable all the more engaging. You have composed THE perfect storm of fluff and have left me feeling almost as giddy as I did those precious months when I was falling in love with my own romantic life partner. Thank you for this masterpiece!

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Thank you!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!! 💕

You know a story is perfect when you love everything about it, are sad when it's over, and wish with all your heart that there was more all the while being grateful for what is written. This is a Fluttercord masterpiece.

"She was practically being carried up the stairs to Rarity's personal arsenal room of fashion weaponry."

I love that descriptor :rainbowlaugh:
I also really enjoy how so far all of Fluttershy's friends know exactly who this mystery "stallion" is. Not that it's very hard to guess:raritywink:

Hit me hard with the Feels in just the first chapter!

Applejack is perfect to stop Fluttershy's insecurities from getting too far.

This story is going great!

In a flash, Rarity had grabbed Fluttershy by the hoof, yanked her inside the boutique, locked the door, and rotated the "Open" sign to "Closed".

:rainbowlaugh:
Love how everyone knows it's Discord she has feelings for.

This is awesome! Spike and Big Mac are being such good friends to Discord!

I love that Discord is basically twitter-pated at the end of the chapter.

AAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!

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