All that hard work to get into shape for summer and poor Cherry Jam gets got. I wonder if she tasted like cherries... Anyway that was still a pretty good way to go if you ask me, relatively quick and painless in the fangs of a mysterious beauty.
Um, anyway, I love the journal entries slowly revealing what happens and I can't wait to see more.
Cool! At first I thought that the ponies in the first chapter were having their luminescence stolen (as Izzy said Pegasi do in the movie), but colors makes sense too and has a much more sinister explanation. (Especially for those of us who know what that’s referring to.)
Neat! I really like how whenever Zipp talks about the Spectra, she always talks about it twice. I also have a strange appreciation for these parts:
Not sure why the idea crossed my mind anyway. She’s so absorbed into her "Pippsqueaks”. Gods that’s a stupid name. I told her that today and she got mad. Whatever.
I got my measure kit out and found the cup, measuring out just one ounce. Just a swallow, really, and that’s what I did. I drank that ounce of rainbow liquid.
11031192 It doesn't matter how good or terrible a writer you are, if you want to write something you should write it. If you enjoy writing you should write. If you're worried about being terrible... write anyway! Failure is a part of learning. Accept it and have fun.
11031247 No really I meant that literally I have no writing skills due to the fact that I’m a bit erm delayed mostly because my education was lacking due to stupid teachers saying I was expelled when they turned around and wondered where I was when I didn’t show up. So thanks to them I’m now looking forward to delivering newspapers across the frickin city where I live to pay the bills till I’m old and grey. Thank you Canadian mental health association not to mention the Canadian education system for royally screwing up my future
11031345 That, right there, is a story. We all have stories. While it's true that not everyone is an amazing storyteller, it's also true that everyone has a story to tell.
For some reason I'm thinking of another type of jar with dubious substances that poor zipp is trapped in......
Does that make me a bad person?
All that hard work to get into shape for summer and poor Cherry Jam gets got. I wonder if she tasted like cherries... Anyway that was still a pretty good way to go if you ask me, relatively quick and painless in the fangs of a mysterious beauty.
Um, anyway, I love the journal entries slowly revealing what happens and I can't wait to see more.
Cool! At first I thought that the ponies in the first chapter were having their luminescence stolen (as Izzy said Pegasi do in the movie), but colors makes sense too and has a much more sinister explanation. (Especially for those of us who know what that’s referring to.)
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yeah I'm sad about Cherry Jam. But I guess that's the lesson: Don't investigate dark alley's at night.
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insert evil laughter here
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no. it doesn't make you a bad person. If anything, it makes me worse for making you think about it
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some one should write it though
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go for it!
start your writing journey with a princess and a jar
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i meant someone else i cant write shit
11031192
Don't say that. You could end up being really good. I wasn't always a decent writer either.
But I do understand the hesitation. It took me a long time to post up my first story.
Neat!
I really like how whenever Zipp talks about the Spectra, she always talks about it twice.
I also have a strange appreciation for these parts:
11031192
It doesn't matter how good or terrible a writer you are, if you want to write something you should write it. If you enjoy writing you should write. If you're worried about being terrible... write anyway! Failure is a part of learning. Accept it and have fun.
11031247
No really I meant that literally I have no writing skills due to the fact that I’m a bit erm delayed mostly because my education was lacking due to stupid teachers saying I was expelled when they turned around and wondered where I was when I didn’t show up. So thanks to them I’m now looking forward to delivering newspapers across the frickin city where I live to pay the bills till I’m old and grey. Thank you Canadian mental health association not to mention the Canadian education system for royally screwing up my future
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I'm glad you're liking it so far.
New chapters soon...
11031345
That, right there, is a story.
We all have stories.
While it's true that not everyone is an amazing storyteller, it's also true that everyone has a story to tell.
Do me a favor: write your story and then dm me