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cerealkiller78


...LOOK a distraction!!

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With magic restored to Equestria, Zipp Storm is ecstatic to fly for real. While out enjoying a flight, she happens upon an old pegasi city that was once untouchable due to it being in the clouds. While exploring it, she finds a long abandoned factory...

-Only slight gore.

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Comments ( 9 )

Interesting concept,

Comment posted by The Lightisville Council deleted Oct 24th, 2021

Nice come back too Rainbow Factory and Pegasus Device.:raritywink::heart:

well, that was fun. :pinkiecrazy:

poor Zipp :fluttercry:

Grim. Pretty horrible way to learn about the ancients. But hey at least everyone got a nice rainbow!

Very short, sweet, to the point. I like it!

But if you took a bit more time with it it could have been more impactful. Still, great.

Comment posted by Micaela deleted Dec 23rd, 2021

pipp soon you will realize that your sentence at the end was a joke returbio

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