Major 1920's AU! Booze! Drugs! Sex! Gangsters! Nazi's! Witches! OH MY! See your favorite cartoon characters struggle in the Great Depression and the rise of WW2! Massive crossover!(My Little Pony, Gravity Falls, Loud House, Steven Universe, Star vs the Forces of Evil, Owl House, Amphibia, Lion Guard, Harry Potter, One Piece, Oddworld, Shark Tale, Invader Zim, Jackie Chan, Bioshock, DuckTales, Ed, Edd 'n' Eddy, Code Lyoko, My Life as a Teenage Robot, Adventure Time, Wander Over Yonder, The little Mermaid, The Amazing World of Gumball, Futurama, Star Wars, Fran Bow, Legend of Korra, American Dragon, Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, Legends of Chima, Solar Opposites, Saints Row, Xiaolin Showdown, Ninjago, Marvel, Fosters Home for Imaginary Friends, Dilbert and many more!)
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Interesting setup and plot. There is some spelling mistakes and grammar but it’s a good start and interesting lore.
And like the Steven Universe part, with the you got rid of the bear but now the wolves are the problem.
Also with the Frog family the Planters. The mother dying during birth doesn’t make sense as they’re frogs who lay eggs which I think is cannon to the show. And the eggs of frogs are soft so the mother wouldn’t had died laying a soft egg.
Are you trying to score as many Google hits as you can or are all of those going to appear?
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Yes, ALL of them. Although One Piece will be more of a 'teasing- blink and you'll miss it- hint of what is to come in later chapters'.
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Actually, if you'll re-read it you'll see that I have Amphibia as one of the nations that were destroyed during the Tunguska blast. I'm going for a 'haroshima' type deal, basically her body was so badly damaged...that even laying a soft egg would kill her....provided she didn't get immediate PROPER medical attention, which she DIDN'T thinks to racism.
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Uh...by 'bear' and 'wolves' do you mean the 'tyrants and revolutionaries'?
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Thank you and sorry about that...I'm starting to think it's my computer. Even with MicrosoftWord my Spellcheck just isn't working...
11007285
it's a saying
you got rid of the bear but now you have to deal with the wolves
in other words you got rid of a problem but that was the only thing keeping all the other problems under control
WHAT IS GOING ON?
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And I thought Pooh’s Adventures was an overload.
11007435
I assume the author decided that making a bunch of nonsense, never-finished fics is a great way to shill his book, but I may be wrong.
They’re right you over did it with the crossovers and it’s very hard for people to understand what’s going on.
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No, it's more an 'experiment laboratory'. Many of my stories are just 'prototypes', stuff I experiment on to expand and improve my writing craft. But to be fair, I do allow ANYONE to adopt ANY of my stories to finish them. Is there a particular story of mine you like? Feel free to adopt it or give it to your friends.
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Ah, gotcha. Well, that is one of the theme's here.
11007473
I guess. This story seems to randomly jump between crossovers, and doesn't depict any of them accurately. Andrew Ryan, I doubt, would behave as depicted in the story, considering his Great Chain philosophy.
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Well to be fair, it's the first chapter. It was mainly to introduce the characters, lay the groundwork for the lore and worldbuilding. Also, there's a MYSTERY element here, so a lot of stuff is SUPPOSED to be vague and obscure...all leading up to big reveals in later chapters.
Also I gotta ask, why are you against big crossovers? Most of your stories are huge crossovers themselves.
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Yeah but not all at once in one big chapter and not having so many different worlds all mixed together in one shared history.
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Like all the crossovers that are set in space or have their own space empires just doesn’t make sense in why they’re all on one planet and not having a space empire. It should be more like seeing how Star is a crossover portals are open around earth allowing travel to other worlds and with the space traveling crossovers, they visiting earth to refuel and resupply as Earth is now a backwater port like in the old sailing ship days where ships have no choice but to stop as some ports to get what they need. And the plot can center around humans dealing with the sudden change in having to deal with other races and new technology.
With what you wrote I have no idea what is even going on or who is the main stars.
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That's because there ISN'T(no main players I mean)...I'm experimenting with the 'anthology/slice of life' genre a bit....although there will be a main plot, half the time it will be focused on the PEOPLE and how their struggling/adapting/LIVING during a dawn of a new era in humanity.
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Agree to disagree, I've worked since January on this one chapter, and I like to think it just explodes with content, lore and world-building
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Agree to disagree. Again, this is an EXPERIMENT, I'm testing out what works and what doesn't. If I just played it safe and kept 'everything the same'...then what would be the point of writing fanfiction? If I wanted 'same' I'd have never gotten involved in fanfiction in the first place and just stuck to cannon.
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(grins evilly) So good you brought up Ryan...shame we didn't get to see him more in this chapter...but you'll be happy to hear this will be MORE then remedied NEXT chapter...
What the heck is this
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Right.
Well remember if readers can’t understand what’s going on you’ll be basically only be writing a story only you’ll be reading. Seeing how many people wrote they have no idea what’s going on already.
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Actually, if you look at the fanfiction version you'll see an equal number of people enjoyed it and understood it(Before counting; remember I posted this on it's own, tales of the falls, tales of the Loud AND Tales of the Star And Hoodie). So I'm chalking it up to a ties, which good enough for me(As far as a first chapter goes)
I check and I don’t see and reviews saying it’s good
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What are you talking about?
What do you call this then?
OMAC001 : Can't wait to see more!
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MonoSheep : Words taken away with a simple wow.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant : Loving the set up of this AU. Some interesting choices in how you adapted these characters to the setting. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Keep up the good work.
Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.
RonaldM40196867 : I love BioShock.
Gamelover41592 : excellent work on this chapter did not expect this big of a crossover and also welcome back :)
RonaldM40196867 : (this is a separate review from where I also put it on 'Loud Tales') Good to know.
RonaldM40196867 : (he liked it so much he reviewed it three times! This time on Tales of the Star and Hoodie) Tragedy sells.
Remember I said my FANFiCTION account, not my Fimfiction account.
As the resident crossover edgelord, I have to ask...
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You still need to make it be readable and not the reader having to know all the different crossovers before hand to know what’s going on and with how mess up the world is in how all those crossovers can even all have the same lore that makes it all work together. You didn’t do much to set how the world works.
Yes I do have big crossovers but I do work to make it work so that it wouldn’t make sense. Like portals to other worlds like in Star vs, or all of them appearing because of them being brought to life by a magic flashlight or something like that.
Yours is just a tangle web of how can all of them be on the same planet at once.
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Eh, 'you can't please everyone'. Obviously I'll learn what I can from this and do better, but as long as I make a large enough amount of people happy, I'm satisfied. Worrying about EVERYONE being happy will just drive me nuts.
And what do you mean 'didn't set how the world worked?' Didn't you read my footnotes?
Come on man. There are humanized ponies AU, Monstar AU's, Dipper demon AU's... why can't there be a 'aliens/magical creatures are foreign country' AU's'?
And yes, I know there's a difference in SCALE...but to ME, that's just incentive to do BETTER! For all you know, this could be the start of crazy new fanfic trend- like the one's above -Maybe your right...maybe this could've been better...but who know's? Maybe my writing this will inspire someone make a AU fic like this that's BETTER! Something that would never have happened if I didn't take the time to write this!
Seeing how much of a kess the lore and history of the story is. Try writing it like a sitcom where strange stuff happens for no reason but for that weeks thing.
As in a sitcom you dont question why there is suddenly a magic curse and next week there are aliens. It's a sitcom and that's how sitcoms work
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That more accurately describes a sketch show than a sitcom, but anyways. All this lore from many different properties piled on top of one another is very confusing.
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Depends on what show as the magic and aliens happen on Married with Children which is a sitcom.
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I will admit I don't know that one. My main reference point with sitcoms is British productions, which tend to be a bit more grounded.
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The sitcoms I watch are American in the late 80s and 90s before I stop watching them.
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I see.
11011370
I like sitcomes, but I prefer serialized stories with plot, myth arcs, character development, etc.
Come on man, what do you have against experimenting? Just because something has never been tired before doesn't make it bad. If no one tried to do something different, we'd never get new exciting things. In any case I prefer to dump as much of the groundwork(worldbuilding, character introduction, etc) in the first chapter as possible so I can move on to the real story.
And people DO like this, I got a ton of favorites for this story...for some reason it dosen't show up on the story...wait, do they show up on the story? I actually can't tell.
11007168
You know how some YouTube video descriptions have the same random ass shit at the bottom?
That's the kind of vibe it gives me, But somehow worse.
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I guess it's for the same purpose, to lure people googling for those shows...
Did discord write this?
That description is fascinatingly incomprehensible.
11034535
How so?
11035067 I don’t think that I could explain in a way that would be helpful to you.
At the end of the day, what matters is that you’re having fun, and you clearly are, so. Keep on keeping on.
11035163
thank you
I fucken love how you made the description for your story mate...I never laugh so hard for such a title (in a good way not in a insult way)
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thank you
the description of this has amused me enough that I don't need to read the story