Just a pone who likes to write about other pones in compromising situations ranging from sexy to deadly and everywhere in between. https://ko-fi.com/scarletribbon
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And yes, I am aware that the meter is broken in places.
Don’t worry about the meter. It flowed enough.
This was good. Like, really good.
It’s been a Loooooooong time since I’ve seen some poetry on here. It’s a form not considered enough, I think.
I can’t explain how much I enjoyed this. Simple story, stunning poetry.
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This is so good, like, there are no words on how to describe it. I'm pretty much speechless at this point lol. I never thought of reading poetry on here would capture my interest since there's hardly any poetry on here.
Your summary text sounds like something a Gravemind would say.
what the hell
From past experience I know that poetic rules are a chore, so I at least applaud the attempt, but when you blunder with the rhyming on the very second verse ('then' with 'them') it doesn't really inspire confidence for the rest of it...
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The only non-perfect rhyme in the entire piece. I noticed that when I reread it back after publishing, but this entire thing was written in 4 hours without any real editing.
I didn't figure anyone would make a huge deal about a single rhyming pair out of dozens of pairs, but since you've pointed it out, I fixed it.
Nice
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It's a minor fix, but it actually adds a lot to the meaning of the whole thing.
I wish I could like it again.
I never read anything like it!!!
This may be the best thousand worder I have ever read.
This might be the first poetry I've read here. Very well done.