Hi, I’m Aiden Walter Dixon.
Most just call me Aiden or Addy. I'm an archeological detective who's travelled the world in my submarine, on my mountain bike, on my skateboard, and flying high in my paramotor.
This is the story of how during a daring attempt to investigate the numerous disappearances of ships and airplanes in the Bermuda Triangle, I was sucked into a vortex and ended up in a seaside town, where I met a cute hooved friend who was just as passionate about her own kind's history.
Let me tell you about it.
P.S.: Quick disclaimers:
1. My Little Pony does not exist in the human world, so no human knows of ponies' existence. I have made the ponies are around 30 inches tall at the withers (shoulder peak).
2. This takes place in between the A New Generation movie and Tell Your Tale.
3. I do talk about guns in this story. Please keep the comments politics-free and thanks.
Chapter 1 Act 1
“The Visitor From Beyond”
Genshin Style Quest
A good intro
I admit I'm kind of amused by how the author feels the need to inform us that despite sailing dangerously close to Cuba, that wretched hive of villany, he remained a real red-blooded American unswayed by the lies of leftist propaganda. Thank God Almighty for a coveniently timed podcast. Who knows what traitorous thoughts might've infected his mind, given the precarious proximity of those goshdarn commie shores.
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Thanks for the comment. I actually got a good laugh outta this.
Hold on you made them tall as the shoulder? That’s a bit scary horses are tall but ponies?
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Waist-height actually, so about 8-9hh - a teeny bit taller than here.
So far its been nice I like the scale you got
So I guess you aren't having her new house where she and her friends all live together?
Nothing wrong hugging someone who is in need a hug. Also, hugging ponies are so soft unless they try to eat your hair
Rock Climbing is super fun. I don't see that much with stories but hey this has been really good.
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Nah this story takes place in between the A New Generation movie and Tell Your Tale, so the Crystal Brighthouse has not yet been built.
Well, he got over the shock quite fast
Then again, the last chapters had stabling the main character as someone’s with experience. So it does make sense that he can keep a cold head.
Well, this fic is definitely interesting and specially endearing
You got a new reader mate :) now to wait for the next update
What did the old cover art look like?
What got them to think he was dangerous??? I imagine that when he sees the Pegasus that he will end up in jail with Sunny and Izzy.
Not really ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
It does makes sense for the ex-isolated pony races to get jumpy at the sight of an estrange creature like a human.
Also, now I’m hyped for the next chapter
Wait did this strange earth pony come out of nowhere or did he pop up at earlier chapters?
You might need to add the Human tag.
comments remind me of
#Nuke Cuba, Blame Canana
There goes my fear of the deep
Giving this pony a hug fills you with the Power-Of-Broship
Nice mystery
Just a tip: using radar around a warship is a bad idea if you’re trying to hide, especially that close. That gives them an ESM track, and then they can call in ASW aircraft.
Very Jules Vern.
He seems to be taking this rather too well, but then I remembered that people like him existed. They called them Pioneers.
what have you done… the cuteness is to much… the girls… they like him don’t they…. be carful not to draw in the silly ships 🚢 that loves a good human story around here
Nice chapter. I wonder how they’ll handle Zephyr Heights since well they will likely be attacked. Also don’t be afraid of guns they can be use to protect you and others it’s placing them in the wrong hands or hooves is the issue.
Not sure if you need to raise the rating but that’s up to you. Also, 30’ up the shoulders? That’s very tall
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30 inches is only two and a half feet tall. With their neck and head included the ponies would only just over 3 feet, as a yard stick is 36 inches long. That's dwarf levels of short in human terms.
poor little izy
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Ah ok
I need to see a video of this I don’t think I ever watched it before?
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A video of what, exactly?
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The flying thing they are using. I just watched it and looks cool
Things went good for a moment I thought we would get ourselves some crazy action of surviving the skies
Grab a pony. Just cuddle them to death it’s a free nation of petting and telling them how cute and lovable they are
I bet the Queen will make the human her Royal Carrier
Poor Sunny he just loves you as… like a pet owner kidding
Huh a interesting mystery about an Alicorn who bakes? Cool
watch as the queen learns that having a human to be her “human owner” to hold her and pet her is going to make her want him to stay.
Just unholster a mini-gun, it'll instantly diffuse a situation
He should show them films like Star Wars or something
This is pretty good, I'm you giving six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Your story is amazing so far. This chapter in particular was…. I just can’t find the words how adorable this was. It was so cute!!! I hope to see more of this affection chapters and please don’t forget Hitch. He deserves some of Aiden’s affection as well.
Until the next chapter! 👋
Very good on your new chapter, I like it! Hope to see more of your upcoming chapters and remember: From my own experience, I want to say that you should follow your heart, and the mind will follow you. Believe in yourself, and you will create miracles.
Very good story, I'm enjoying it a lot.
The main story plot.... to pick up the Queen! and give her belly rubs
It's cool, I'm okay with it.
Queen didn’t see nothing
Civil? Bro, we all know that neither sisters are ready for the throne rather it should be Izzy. Time for unicorns to rise Brony’s
Kidding around. I haven’t really checked the comments or notes much just been reading the story when new chapters come so if I made mistakes sorry about that. The chapter has been fine but sadly I feel… this being more slice of life than adventure which I am sorry that I have gotten a little bored…
I wonder what Queen Heaven meant by wonderful son… no she silly she won’t have Pipp be engage to a human… I need to stay away from romance fanfics
So since we our nearing the end hopefully they’ll find Sprout since he planned the attacks right? Anyways, let’s find a way home 🏡
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I feel ya. I've been dragging stuff out too much so next chapter the adventure will be pumped up and the story will enter a state of conclusiveness. No need to apologize.
Tbh I thought Zip would try being a racer like Rainbow but becoming a detective wasn’t something I thought would happened in the show. That’s cool for you to do for her.
I wonder what Sprout will do
This state isn't Texas, is it?
It’s to bad they both didn’t get to spend much time together which after the meeting I believe Sprouts life will changed so much better being able to come back to his 3 friends and make more friends along the way.
This new chapter is great, Ahmad J Charles I like it!
Wait did he ever pet the Queen?
Flying is really nice. Feels free