A stallion, a head taller than the Big Mac, arrives in Ponyville. He is quiet, shy, and he is deformed. He has nothing. No name, no past. The only thing he has is a ragged cloak, a matted coat, and scars.
Apparently for the ponies of Ponyville, that's all it takes to be called a monster.
A very interesting read I'd like to see where this gose. keep up with the updates π
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Two things.
1) First chapter could use some polish. A few awkwardly spaced paragraphs and misspelled words.
2) ...holy cow, is this an honest-to-goodness novel!Frankenstein crossover that I'm seeing here?? :D
Keep up the good work!
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First point: Yeah i know, i need an editor or something. first posted writing on the site and i just wanted to get it up first.
Second point: MAYBEEEEEEEEE π
This story is so awesome!!! I canβt wait to read more!!!!
I think you should name him Mike. Just Mike, lol.