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MoonlitMelody


"Writing fanfiction can't be that hard, can it?" —Quote from person about to find out how hard writing fanfiction can be

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Arizona is the Champion of the Prairie and she's going to save the world. No if, ands, or buts. Foenum is relying on her.

Pom, on the other hand, thinks about why that is.


Shoutout to TFH stories being allowed on Fimfic. Cover image is a crop of some art done by the incredible HoshPosh.

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Comments ( 3 )

I always kinda wished TFH's tag could be standalone. Even if it doesn't have much of a fanfiction scene, it just feels right, y'know what I mean?

Unrelated musings aside, that was a nice, well-written interaction between those two characters. Nicely done — have a thumbs up!
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Thank you very much! And I agree on the tag stuff, even though I understand why the system has the restrictions it does. If only more people wrote TFH fanfic... :raritydespair:

I enjoyed this story, it gets a thumbs up from me.
The only thing I feel the need to criticize is the use of accents; while the accents are tied to the characters, it's a dangerous game to use them and moderation is important. There were some lines I had to read over multiple times to properly understand. What I personally do in my fic, or try to do anyway, is mix the use of the accented language with normal writing—Pom may use "ye" once in a sentence but "you" later in that same sentence, or mix "can't" and "cannae," etc. It helps give the impression of how the character should sound in your head, but doesn't go overboard and detract from the writing. It's something to think about when writing future TFH stories, which I hope you do!

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