Asher Blade
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Generally, showing that through narration rather than telling the reader works more elegantly.
really nice chapter dude, keep up the good work!!
What about the changelings
summery needs editing
kratos???
also if a majority of people don't like your book don't stop writing it keep writing for you and the people who want to see how it ends but if one day you feel like you don't want to write it anymore then that's solely up to you
Ew katana
14 likes and dislikes balanced as all things should be
I would not read this. If the author cannot be bothered to write a decent description it is guaranteed to be poor quality.
10947103
When you're description don't even have "," then you know it is bad
10948257 Are you trying to say something? If so, then be direct please. I am not a fan of word games or semantic ploys.
10948260
Oh ok
Because author of this story doesn't even have "," in description, it's very hard to read and some words don't make any sense
10948262 So, you are asking for specifics for the sake of the author? I can do that.
Author: if you use propper grammer and correct spelling, you are much more likely to get readers. It shows a disrespect for your own work if you have spelling errors and mis-capitalization in your description. If the author cannot be bothered to respect their own work, then why should anyone else?
10948271
Sorry, English isn't my first language.
Was that not one of your thoughts like hmmm maybe the author doesn’t know English so there might be some mistakes even if they know English they might fix the errors later on in the story
10948497 That makes some sense. Rather arrogant of me to assume you were just lazy.
10948628
My mother tougne is Russian. And, I've just moved to America so trying use it all the time is hard. I figured if I practice typing it may I could speck it better. But if you know someone willing to edit I'd love to have the help.
10948704 Afraid I do not know anyone for that, however there is a Group for it on here. You should be able to find someone willing to help.
10948704
are you stil writing?
10971242
Yes, but I guess you could say I'm a little put off now.
10971445
understandable
10971445
also, did you find an editor?
10974841
No
What about hands?
What skill?
How is he gonna find them?
Ok, I’m a little confused. Why would it matter what armor they are wearing?
10994874
Gold armor is for princess celestial guards.
10994907
But, don’t all of them kill and enslave humans?
10994928
The gold ones did the deed. I am guessing the other color belongs to luna's guards and I don't think celestial is very happy with this news.
10994984
But, why would she care?
10995000
Having your soldiers possibly murdering folks without permission isn't a good thing especially for a leader because it makes them look like their soldiers are out of control or worse that they said it was an okay thing to do.
10995000
Plus, them attacking a free human means he can do damage to a reputation.
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10995047
So it’s about image?
10995087
Would you want your neighbors thinking you say it okay just to murder people especially when you are supposed in the peace business? It could cause a lot of problems for celestial if it got out.
10995087
Basically, If faith in a ruler is lost then all hell breaks loose. what happened to the czars.
10995092
So they’re ok with slavery, but killing is bad?
10995094
Czars?
10995105
Empire of Russia the last one died during world war 1 along with his family
10995104
Slavery is one of those if we're not affected by it then we probably won't say anything. Look at our history. Lots of places had and it took forever to kill it because it was someone else problem even when they grew up and got rid of it. It took getting their butts kicked to knock sense into them.
10995114
You mean the USA right
10995119
The uk had them at one just got rid of them way sooner plus another country who name i can't remember but none of them care to do anything about slavery except for eventually getting rid of theirs. And it took getting their butts kicked to convince them.
.... Why this is sound like a Gary Stu fic?
10995114
What about murder? That doesn’t affect the ponies, right?
10995147
The people might not know about it. If the guard got up to this without permission then they would keep it quiet as possible so celestial wouldn't find out and have their heads. If she finds out and does that everyone will find out because mad celestial isn't seen mad very often.
10995150
I think I kinda understand.
This story rocks I can't wait to see what you have planned out for the next chapter
Great chapter
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I like how you let Bella get Revenge
Can't wait for next chapter ☺️
Hmmm, this is a story that’s for sure. Not sure how to feel bout it, fast paced and incoherent a fair amount of the time but I can see it’s kinda become better since the first chapter. I’ll track it but I’ll have to read a little more to decide if I want to like and fav or move on. So let’s see what future chapters hold.