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HypnoticGemini


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Equestria has fallen. All resistance has been crushed. The land has been ravaged. They have taken over.

However, even in ponykind's darkest hour, there is a splinter of hope...

My first fanfic (but by no means the first thing I have written), so rate fairly and offer constructive criticism so I can improve my writing.

Rated teen for non-graphic depictions of violence and some coarse language. More tags will come as more characters appear.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 11 )

Inspiration for this story came from "Somewhere Only We Know" by PatchworkPoltergeist. Same premises, different characters, different storyline.
So yeah, enjoy...

I wonder how the humans' arrival is going to be explained.

Also, I read the entire thing, and I didn't find a single grammar error or spelling mistake, so you're clear there.

Cheers, mate. :moustache:

1241464 I don't mind if you have your doubts about this, it's only my first fic after all and you can't appeal to everybody.
But thanks for the compliment I guess?

1241968 I'll try to stay away from that, thanks for the advice. :twilightsmile:

1280044 *creepy ghost voice* All shall be revealed.

1473112 Well, this update was long overdue, but yeah, life's been getting in the way recently. Better late than never, though.

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