Equestria has fallen. All resistance has been crushed. The land has been ravaged. They have taken over.
However, even in ponykind's darkest hour, there is a splinter of hope...
My first fanfic (but by no means the first thing I have written), so rate fairly and offer constructive criticism so I can improve my writing.
Rated teen for non-graphic depictions of violence and some coarse language. More tags will come as more characters appear.
Inspiration for this story came from "Somewhere Only We Know" by PatchworkPoltergeist. Same premises, different characters, different storyline.
So yeah, enjoy...
I wonder how the humans' arrival is going to be explained.
Also, I read the entire thing, and I didn't find a single grammar error or spelling mistake, so you're clear there.
Cheers, mate.
1241464 I don't mind if you have your doubts about this, it's only my first fic after all and you can't appeal to everybody.
But thanks for the compliment I guess?
1241968 I'll try to stay away from that, thanks for the advice.
1280044 *creepy ghost voice* All shall be revealed.
Sweet, an update!
1473112 Well, this update was long overdue, but yeah, life's been getting in the way recently. Better late than never, though.