• Member Since 29th Jan, 2016
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Lux Tenebris


Creating stories is the only thing I have left where I feel like I add value to the world.

Comments ( 8 )

Very cute, if a little short for my personal taste.
Was a fun read though!

a good short clop one shot.

I like where you took the prompt. It's a nice read, cute, and scratches that Gallstream itch that keeps cropping up. Thanks for the story. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for reading it, happy summer sin!

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I thank you for the praise.

While the fic is good, the idea that Silverstream has to "put out" to prove she is serious is a pretty toxic way of looking at relationships and makes Gallus a very shallow character. I just can't like it for this reason alone.

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That was never how I wanted it to come across. Would you like to share how you would change the dialogue to get the same point across without making it seem like she has to 'put out'.

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