Oh no, not the Vixen🥺. Sorry bud, but I read through the story and can't connect to the character. Seems a little over the top to me, but it is a good story, just not my cup of tea... For now. I'll keep reading to see if things get better.
10909673 No problem, I appreciate it, but I'd think he'd get some code oh honor. You know how the old Boss in the Overhaul Arc was. He was a crime boss, but he had ethics you know. This character seems like he's just lost at the moment with no direction. Still, I hope there's no more fox killing (big fox lover here) but that's for you to decide. I can tell that right now, you're just putting up foundations for the story.
10909667 The only reason your fic garnered my attention at all was because it slipped into the featured list, probably because Displaced is super marketable, but the thing that made me stay was, to be honest, the frankly impressive levels of cringe that your tag list and description inspires. Do not lose heart though, young adventurer, because every veteran has passed through the angsty shadows of Edgelord Valley.
You will either outgrow it, or you will burn out like a falling star.
Ah yes the children of this website who dislike everything just because they can Guessing it gives them the only taste of satisfaction after their mom dropped them off at the grocery store it never returned
"Awwww come on!" That was expected but what came next wasn't. "I don't want to kill a super hot ninja vixen,"
The one female fox Ninja blushed behind her mask as he looked at the ninja in the dark thinking she couldn't be seen.
"That's not fair... Heck, I don't like hurting foxes in general male or female! Or cats, or dogs, hell bears are on that list too but putting out waifu material for me to kill?! What is wrong with you!"
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"Seriously that is a crime within an even worse crime," Holding the bridge of his mask he spoke. "I'm not being sexist or anything sure I'll kill a lady if they deserve it but come on! This sucks! I have to kill all of you otherwise you'll hunt me down and what not and honestly I don't want to kill the super badass ninja fox lady,"
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"This is not simping though just to make that clear I'm just stating the fact I am not going to enjoy this," The ninjas looked at one another.
Deadpool mode activated
She looked so cool too... so much white fur and a super soft looking tail... god I wish I could bury my face into that tail of hers if it wasn't covered in blood and what not... she seemed pretty cool too and was very well built from what I could tell,"
The one female fox Ninja blushed behind her mask as he looked at the ninja in the dark thinking she couldn't be seen.
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"She looked so cool too... so much white fur and a super soft looking tail... god I wish I could bury my face into that tail of hers if it wasn't covered in blood and what not... she seemed pretty cool too and was very well built from what I could tell," Placing the katana on the ground next to his bed he took off his shoes at the front of his bed as well while he grabbed water bottle with his toothbrush to the bathroom where he flipped on the still working light.
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Ohhhh shhhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiii-
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Should I change the cover?
noo.... the foxes......
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nay you good fam keep it
Keep up the good work
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Agreed, I really F********** HATE IT, when that happens in Wattpad, and sometimes in here.
10909167
Ooohh... That's a spicy tag salad.
That poor ninja vixen.
10909253
It wasn't funny the first time or any time after that
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I just call them like I see them, man.
Oh no, not the Vixen🥺. Sorry bud, but I read through the story and can't connect to the character. Seems a little over the top to me, but it is a good story, just not my cup of tea... For now. I'll keep reading to see if things get better.
Red Japony (Japanese)-Style blade? Jetstream Sam’s VT7 HF Blade from Metal Gear Rising Revengeance?!
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There are thousands of them and just so happen to comment on mine
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I'm trying a different version of the character realistic in some ways but not super edgy
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I was going for both of Samuel's blade and Adam's Wilt and blush blade but without the gun sheath, I did say I wanted to add some metal gear.
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No problem, I appreciate it, but I'd think he'd get some code oh honor. You know how the old Boss in the Overhaul Arc was. He was a crime boss, but he had ethics you know. This character seems like he's just lost at the moment with no direction. Still, I hope there's no more fox killing (big fox lover here) but that's for you to decide. I can tell that right now, you're just putting up foundations for the story.
10909674 Adam Taurus? I like his blade and his Semblance
10909667
The only reason your fic garnered my attention at all was because it slipped into the featured list, probably because Displaced is super marketable, but the thing that made me stay was, to be honest, the frankly impressive levels of cringe that your tag list and description inspires. Do not lose heart though, young adventurer, because every veteran has passed through the angsty shadows of Edgelord Valley.
You will either outgrow it, or you will burn out like a falling star.
The image you're using right now is a bit of a spoiler itself. You might want to consider changing it.
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They're probably better because they can't write a reasonable story worth a damn
I like
Ah yes the children of this website who dislike everything just because they can Guessing it gives them the only taste of satisfaction after their mom dropped them off at the grocery store it never returned
The babies that keep disliking will just prove me right
Deadpool mode activated
NOOOOOOOO, WHY!!!
A thing in life we must all understand, "We cannot have all the waifus". It is a hard lesson, but a good one to learn early on.
Also, just noticed our lad here doing a good ol Yang stance, ready to pummel some dweebs.
Oh for the love of... even in the ever expansive world of fanfiction Spike gets st on even when he is trying to do some good.
“I’m a furry” “sexy fox vixen” I see our green devil is a man of culture
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Sure we can, you just have to have "healing" powers. (Wow that's a dark reference ...lol )
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(You think? But still I understood that reference)
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Nuxtaku: Does she have big booba?
XD
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Taki mushrooms