Aiden Pearce had gotten old.
With so many years under his belt after humble beginnings as a simple contractor and hired gunman, to his time as the vigilante in both Detroit and London- even his part in the murder of Olivier Garneau, it would be a no-brainer that as he was inching closer and closer to his golden years -to unofficially retire to the safehouses he knew in Detroit.
Now with almost no reason, he finds himself in Equestria, struggling to adapt, let alone put the past behind him as it slowly makes its way to surface once again, following set-back after set-back, an older Aiden turned young again still lacks his wisdom, yet not his smarts, as they carve out a new path in Equus.
For better, or for worse.
Interesting, can’t wait to see where this goes!
Great job with this! Keep up the good work!
Rip
An interesting premise. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Uh...Oh...
Oh I'm getting some Steel Ball Run vibes here!
Great job man, this story needs more recognition!
Luna done messed up.
wow, I never thought Aiden could "Hack" the ponies with his mind and use a gun, this is creative af!
My prediction is that we will follow the story of one of these foxes.
Did Twilight forget to set the coordinates to ~0 ~1 ~0?
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The joys of putting all coordinates to 0
Short start, and one paragraph is glued
I personally suggest ending any paragraph in 5 to 6 lines, anymore and it starts being hard to read and not just skip everything
This prologue is taking too long, gluing some chapters together might be a good idea, and it's also too... Unclear, mystery is good and all but not to the point the reader doesn't understand what's going on.
You really love long paragraphs hmn?
So, is he like this
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Or an anthro fox it wasn't really clear
Cyberpunk?
Oh so he's like this then?
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This is getting more and more interesting
I love competent protagonists, not enough of those
Wait... Did I just realize that's watchdogs now?
Random ass fight, I loved it
Well, at least she realizes it
Meh
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Slight formatting error here. Missing square brackets.
Not sure what this means, nor CToS (2) I think CToS was mentioned as an IoT network of some kind.
Edit: the enforcer definition is next chapter
I make one fucking joke chapter and just get twenty notifications my god.
Don't worry. Next actual chapter is probably in a few hours
Interesting. And hacking other pony's magic especially.
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I'll fix that while I'm on my computer
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Odd. I could have sworn these were completely separate when I wrote them initially. I'll give it a look.
I lied. Tarkov wiped today and now im busy playing.
Im also busy mourning the loss of the Tarkov X MLP Fanfic called "Free At Last", i cant find it anymore
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Thanks. I got the idea randomly while looking over some character notes and after that it sort of clicked. It just made (personally) alot of sense to transfer over a few of his skills in some way.
Didn't expect to see you again, glad I was wrong
more foxfox adventures
Didn't understand much but ok
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Whoops, fixed