Her name is Airy. A Cryst-Fairy, created from memories and soul of a deceased person by his malevolence, lord Grogar. Now, her duty is simple; Find a way to free her master... and it all begins with a crystalline heart of an Empire....
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out
[1] Missing unit of time.
the
[1] Missing, "a".
to
[2] Would recommend changing to "the illusion of privacy."
chance
spent
be unable to
[1] Missing noun
become
You mean 'chance' right?
Why do I feel that she's still going to get dressed up as a doll for the young foal.
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How about in the next chapter, you'll just DM the grammar errors? i'll give you permission to send me a message. But thank you, these things slip away from me, even after i try to read the chapter before posting.