There was a moment of tense silence and awkwardness, until Twilight spoke. “Um...m-my name is Twilight Sparkle, faithful student to Princess Celestia, co-ruler of Equestria, and princess of the sun." she said, before jestering a thumb over at Spike. "And this is my number-one assistant, Spike." Spike poked his head out from behind Twilight and waved. "To answer your second question, you’re in the Everfree Forest, located in Equestria."
"Alright, that answers two of my questions.”
“Now care to tell us who you are?”
“Right, sorry. The name’s Amy Anderson the Third. College student at the University of Texas.”
Twilight smiled nervously and shook her head in affirmation to the creature. "Well, a unicorn to be precise, but..oh where are my manners?" She cleared her throat, closed her eyes, and began to introduce herself. "Ahem! My name is Twilight Sparkle, faithful student to Princess Celestia, co-ruler of Equestria, and princess of the sun. What's your name?"
"The name’s Amy Anderson the Third, semi-famous artist and cosplayer."
Eventually, the two companions made it to where the smoke was coming from. The smoke began to slowly disappear. To their surprise, there was somepony, or rather, something, standing in the midst of the smoke. As the smoke vanished, it became apparent that whatever it was, it wasn’t a pony. What stood there was a creature wearing a greyish-black sweater. Underneath the sweater was black skin tight suit that covered her body and had red glowing marks on her arms, a red and gold colored scarf wrapped around her neck. It had a rather pale complexion, with amber-gold eyes and crimson red long hair. The creature was also carrying a sword with the coloration of crimson red and black covering most of the sword.
If none of the male characters get a little bit of a crush on her, then I’ll be shocked.
"Oh Spike, I'm sure she'll tell us everything we need to know, once we get to Canterlot. I'm sure Celestia would want to know as well, especially Artemis. Now come on, let's go back and see if she’s willing to come with us."
Artemis?
It was the last part of what Twilight had said that sent chills down Amy's spine. If there was one thing she hated the most on her list of things she hated, other than her father and mother, that would have to be being used as a test subject and being experimented on. Well, that and a few other things, but those were besides the point.
"Do you realize that we just found Spike?" The unicorn asked as Spike shook his head. "An alien from another planet Spike! ANOTHER PLANET! Do you know what this means!?"
. Yo just to let you know there's a typo in this sentence, that, is supposed to be, what.
You might wanna read your story description. You made some typos. :p
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Thanks for the heads up
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np! ^^
Yep, you said this twice.
Anyway, Twilight is a dumbass. I think Celestia should be very disappointed and punish her.
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....I miss having an editor. Thanks for pointing that one out
PLEASE tell me Laby will appear in this story.
ah yes a female main character, i will watch your career with great interest
Funnily enough, I just hit Crimson Avenger myself on Elsword
I feel like this is either gonna be hilarious, disturbing or stupid... or maybe all three.
Either way, looking forward to the next chapter.
Awesome first chapter, but the art for the story is Flakes from Happy Tree Friends?
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.....It's was kinda the only art I could find that would give a decent description of what Amy looks like Q^Q
If none of the male characters get a little bit of a crush on her, then I’ll be shocked.
Artemis?
How many things does she have on her list?
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I’m more disappointed that spike barely tried to talk her out of it.
. Yo just to let you know there's a typo in this sentence, that, is supposed to be, what.